After reading the synopsis, I instantly wonder how the story would go. If Den would be able to survive in the new world especially with his low status, or if he wouldn’t make it and will just die helplessly. The first chapters were written well, there were no doubts about that. The story develops at a comfortable speed with good insight on motivations and goals that keeps the whole book entertaining to read. Overall, I would say that the writing quality, update frequency, story development, characters were excellent. The world-building was also done very well, and I really enjoy how the story evolves. I truly hope that this book will do well. Good luck to you, Author.

After 180 chapters, I'm dropping this novel. I made the mistake of buying a 100 chapter unlock, because 30 of those chapters were duplicates. The authors method of frequent updates is to simply release older chapters randomly, scamming money from people. If you decide to read, only unlock single chapters.

4 stars for me. Just read 10 chapters, I wish to read a little bit more but I find a point in the novel where I'm sure many people would drop it. Let's go to the facts; - MC characters is... awful, it's clear that he was a childish and incapable person previously. He has no ambition whatsoever and is very impulsive in his behavior. He doesn't reflect upon his actions nor think about his future. All in all, is quite distateful as a main character, for me he seemed like a random character in a book who died later on. -World building: In this aspect I can say that is well written, although there's nothing crazy, it fits quite well and you don't have a hard time imagining it. Pretty solid. -Interactions: This is a point where I think that while it's not bad, it can improve much more. It's okay but seemed somewhat lacking. There's also little monologues or other tools that could tell us what the MC and other characters think about their situations. All in all, it could clearly improve. -System?: Yes, there's a question mark there, because I keep wondering myself in these 10 chapters, is that really a system? It feels more like a shop. Story wise, i see a clear problem with the novel, which is, the main character. There's no signs or whatsoever that he could improve, there's no goals and anything like that in these chapters that could give you the hope to keep reading it. There's also another point I wish to say this early, is quite simple to see how the author didn't wished to point out in the development of some business or something for the MC, I'm aware this isn't a kingdom building novel, whoever, knowing how his system function, is clearly somewhat a cheat if he could gain quite amount of money, which would ease out his problems. But since this would eliminate the drama and plot for the author, since there would be little to no struggle for the MC, there's no words nor indication from the MC in that aspect. Like a said, 4 stars novel, which is quite good in web novel standard. Just hope for the Main character personality to improve since it makes harder for me to keep reading it. Wish you good luck and success author.

The story started out fine, but then about halfway in they leave the medieval setting and travel to WW2, which was a radical difference from the beginning. Eventually most of the chapters are just repeats. And then some weird stuff about their parents and dying and the story goes silent, and all the chapters named [updated later] and not updated. Also during that halfway plot the whole revenge against his team who betrayed him just dissapears. I don't find it makes sense to go with a WW2 setting halfway through.

as I said before this is the updated review. good book for some people but not for me, Mc is a little beta (forgot the word I have in my mind) and didn't like NPCs character, if you don't mind Mc having weak personality (didn't find the right words for the description of Mc, this is the nearest description I could write) this book is good for u. liked author's previous work (portable something) and liked this novel's idea. good work author 👍

not a fun of beta MC stupid and even though the tags is not enough to cought my Interest and felt bored just looking at it since I'm harem and romance fan, I grit my teeth just so I can see something new since the title is a bit interesting but the MC's stupid personality turn me off . just nahhhh🤮🤮🤮🤮🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

I give five stars because I like this novel. So far the story development is going well. Starting from the characters, world development, plot, etc. I like it plus the story concept that is rarely found "modern weapons vs fantasy". well.. you know it's hard to find a story like that even if there is it's just an abandoned story. okay enough for the review continue the story max

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