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FLANKER_27Lv23yr
2021-08-20 11:58

I give five stars because I like this novel. So far the story development is going well. Starting from the characters, world development, plot, etc. I like it plus the story concept that is rarely found "modern weapons vs fantasy". well.. you know it's hard to find a story like that even if there is it's just an abandoned story. okay enough for the review continue the story max

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A_HasbullahLv3

So, How its Going Mate?

FLANKER_27Lv2

well, the author left this novel and he disappeared from the world

A_Hasbullah:So, How its Going Mate?
A_HasbullahLv3

Exactly, and really? His dozens of last updates is "updated later" and the worst part is that it's premium and filled with nothing but a copy of a random chapter. Well mate, I hope you aren't to late for not paying this chapters on this trash novel from sucked author. I hope for your well-being, and greeting from Indonesia.

FLANKER_27:well, the author left this novel and he disappeared from the world
A_HasbullahLv3

And sorry for my faulty grammar

A_Hasbullah:Exactly, and really? His dozens of last updates is "updated later" and the worst part is that it's premium and filled with nothing but a copy of a random chapter. Well mate, I hope you aren't to late for not paying this chapters on this trash novel from sucked author. I hope for your well-being, and greeting from Indonesia.
FLANKER_27Lv2

yah google translate sangat membantu bukan?

A_Hasbullah:And sorry for my faulty grammar
FLANKER_27Lv2

Tapi, jujur saya sangat menyukai cerita yang dia tulis, saya bahkan membaca beberapa karya yang lainnya, ide ceritanya sangat menarik bagi saya. Walaupun diberhentikan .

A_Hasbullah:Exactly, and really? His dozens of last updates is "updated later" and the worst part is that it's premium and filled with nothing but a copy of a random chapter. Well mate, I hope you aren't to late for not paying this chapters on this trash novel from sucked author. I hope for your well-being, and greeting from Indonesia.
FLANKER_27Lv2

Setidaknya telah mencapai lebih dari 90 bab.Dan yah ,sisanya dilanjutkan dengan imajinasi masing masing. Hei ada rekomendasi novel semacam ini?

FLANKER_27:Tapi, jujur saya sangat menyukai cerita yang dia tulis, saya bahkan membaca beberapa karya yang lainnya, ide ceritanya sangat menarik bagi saya. Walaupun diberhentikan .
A_HasbullahLv3

Nggak, saya nggak pake google translate. Tapi, cerita bagus? Yang bener aja, udah MC nya bloon, Goal dari MC nya tiba-tiba hilang, alur cerita nggak jelas, dan lain-lain.

FLANKER_27:yah google translate sangat membantu bukan?
A_HasbullahLv3

Tapi kalau minta rekomendasi Novel yang berkali kali lebih bagus daripada ini dan udah tamat, nih: Military System God Realm Revolution.Silahkan dinikmati.

FLANKER_27:Setidaknya telah mencapai lebih dari 90 bab.Dan yah ,sisanya dilanjutkan dengan imajinasi masing masing. Hei ada rekomendasi novel semacam ini?
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XerstorenLv13

4 stars for me. Just read 10 chapters, I wish to read a little bit more but I find a point in the novel where I'm sure many people would drop it. Let's go to the facts; - MC characters is... awful, it's clear that he was a childish and incapable person previously. He has no ambition whatsoever and is very impulsive in his behavior. He doesn't reflect upon his actions nor think about his future. All in all, is quite distateful as a main character, for me he seemed like a random character in a book who died later on. -World building: In this aspect I can say that is well written, although there's nothing crazy, it fits quite well and you don't have a hard time imagining it. Pretty solid. -Interactions: This is a point where I think that while it's not bad, it can improve much more. It's okay but seemed somewhat lacking. There's also little monologues or other tools that could tell us what the MC and other characters think about their situations. All in all, it could clearly improve. -System?: Yes, there's a question mark there, because I keep wondering myself in these 10 chapters, is that really a system? It feels more like a shop. Story wise, i see a clear problem with the novel, which is, the main character. There's no signs or whatsoever that he could improve, there's no goals and anything like that in these chapters that could give you the hope to keep reading it. There's also another point I wish to say this early, is quite simple to see how the author didn't wished to point out in the development of some business or something for the MC, I'm aware this isn't a kingdom building novel, whoever, knowing how his system function, is clearly somewhat a cheat if he could gain quite amount of money, which would ease out his problems. But since this would eliminate the drama and plot for the author, since there would be little to no struggle for the MC, there's no words nor indication from the MC in that aspect. Like a said, 4 stars novel, which is quite good in web novel standard. Just hope for the Main character personality to improve since it makes harder for me to keep reading it. Wish you good luck and success author.

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