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nearly forget about this

it's not AI generated, I've read this before, I think it's chinese

no, let it be black and white, bc that's was Mahabharat

+1

it's been 9 days, and no update, I think this is the last power stones, until you update anyway

very good, I think this is the best part of this book

for story development, make the story go down and up, or you could say a dramatic plot. A story that has changes in emotions, tension, or conflict that alternate, and of course make the story more dramatic because that's the element of a novel. For the world background, you actually only explain a few important points from the world, such as when you explain the past of the MC's grandfather and Bhisma , but keep in mind don't make it too long so that the reader doesn't get bored.

quite a good story, only at the beginning it felt very fast, and at the beginning the plot was too much, but as the story progressed the story got better. Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 3/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 3/5 overall 4/5

ok ok, i don't know why but this story got me hooked, i know this is dangerous but please finish the story, i will give my 3 power stones everyday, all for this fanfic.

If we go back further, the problem already existed when Satyavati wanted her descendants to sit on the throne.