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DonaldSenju
DonaldSenjuLv43yr
2021-08-14 01:56

Writing Quality (5 Stars): The story is easy to read, without many grammar and i haven't seen spelling errors. Stability Updates (5 Stars): The author releases a chapter daily. Story Development (5 Stars): I honestly found this story very interesting, especially the initial chapters with the timeline jumps (if you don't like timeline jumps, it's not a problem, they stop forever after 6-7 chapters). The story follows this guy named Dravde (horrible name), trying to survive in One Piece, at the beginning he isn't afraid, even insulting powerful figures boldly, because he thinks he is in a lucid dream. Character Design (5 Stars): The mc of this story is very likeable, a bit eccentric and sometimes cynical, but in the end he is a good guy. His past is not totally revealed even now, but he is shown to have given up in everything to survive (a metaphorical way of saying: i don't care anymore), losing hope in everything after all the times he failed in doing something, even suicide. I'm rating him 5 stars not because i like emo character, because he isn't an emo, his emotions and psychological growth are very human and plausible, probably the best character development i have read on WebNovel. World Background (5 Stars): This fanfiction is not multiverse, the mc only jumps in various timelines of One Piece, only to stop in the canon one.

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Dravde
DravdeAuthor

I try to do a chapter a day and about the name... I just suck naming and this one got the best response a LONG time ago and I stuck with it. Considering the origin of the name... it's just sad how it became my best choise...

PalePlanet
PalePlanetLv4

is there going to be a love interest?

Dravde:I try to do a chapter a day and about the name... I just suck naming and this one got the best response a LONG time ago and I stuck with it. Considering the origin of the name... it's just sad how it became my best choise...
Ballad
BalladLv5

I mean all he's doing is same as every insert following Luffy so I don't see the appeal

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