Writing Quality (5 Stars): The story is easy to read, without many grammar and i haven't seen spelling errors. Stability Updates (5 Stars): The author releases a chapter daily. Story Development (5 Stars): I honestly found this story very interesting, especially the initial chapters with the timeline jumps (if you don't like timeline jumps, it's not a problem, they stop forever after 6-7 chapters). The story follows this guy named Dravde (horrible name), trying to survive in One Piece, at the beginning he isn't afraid, even insulting powerful figures boldly, because he thinks he is in a lucid dream. Character Design (5 Stars): The mc of this story is very likeable, a bit eccentric and sometimes cynical, but in the end he is a good guy. His past is not totally revealed even now, but he is shown to have given up in everything to survive (a metaphorical way of saying: i don't care anymore), losing hope in everything after all the times he failed in doing something, even suicide. I'm rating him 5 stars not because i like emo character, because he isn't an emo, his emotions and psychological growth are very human and plausible, probably the best character development i have read on WebNovel. World Background (5 Stars): This fanfiction is not multiverse, the mc only jumps in various timelines of One Piece, only to stop in the canon one.

this fanfic is really great it has comedy, common sense, and charismatic mc ...........................................................

writing quality 5☆ easy to read story development 4☆ its going good charachter design 5☆ Unique updates 4☆ every 2 days world background 5☆ good

Keep it up author. I already writing a review but didn't actually read because that's how it is you have a title in chapter so I can easily distinguish buy can't really know exactly but this is just my gut feeling that your fanfic was good. My body made of words, my blood for exp, my soul for stability and my mind for the unknown.