Dravde

Rise of the Leek Hero

Author I like your story and keep up with the good work, but as a person who most of the time uses TTS functions to listen to these stories while going through life, these lines ruin the immersion. There's nothing wrong making the text look fancy, but if you could use marks that TTS doesn't pick up, that would be wonderful. Like the card and dice marks and lines between them don't get picked up by the TTS.

When you're Happy and you know it, clap your paws! *pamf pamf*

"I see a very nice treat in front of me." *wink*

I heard that you can trick shadowban by using the reply. Shadowban targets the visible comments but not what has been replied to them.

Shows his flugel form "The time of reckoning has come. I am the judge, jury and executioner. Come, Hell awaits."

It breaks the immersion a bit, but later he does mention that she is a mech so instead I was a bit confused and wondered if she was capable of eating. I don't know anything about Clockwork Planet and Ryuzu to begin with so I'm not aware of how human she can truly act. I recommend you make a simple document where you write what important things happened in each chapter: Livre knows Ryuzu is a mech Livre almost got assassinated by House of Hearth Clervie escaped and got Anemo Vision and so on to keep tabs about what happened and who knows what. You can also make a character specific list for those who appear most of the time in the story. Keep up with the good work, your story is great. d(°∀°d)

Didn't Livre already know that Ryuzu is a mech?

So much that he is 5 mil in debt. That he should pay like right now when he still has money.

I was expecting that Magikarp to slap Gengar but then I remembered it only knows Splash.