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maybe I am being biased but I think you nerfed sun breathing a little bit.
you are a good writer. take your time to flesh out the story but do not drop
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it's been three months
it's going strong so far, I am at chapter 550. and I loved the story and how it's progressing. sometimes i just leave the novel if they don't outright give me an explanation of the power system but here the author scratched the itch even while maintaining the mysteries of the superior beings of the alliances. a little bit of propaganda but it's bearable and not cringe worthy. author does flesh out the worlds that mc visits to and it's a good job for the time it takes for him to master that system and integrate it to his own. comprehension did give him an edge but if the story is progressing the way it is, the comprehension is just a means to his goal and also not hindering the mc and the story but helping him and is readers explore the main universe. great read so far...
yes, Mike's only for victory
thanks for the chapter