Eternal_Shu

fuckkkk....!!!!

going *

ohhhhh!!!! I know where this goiimbg

what?? did he use ai??

hooked from the start author release more chapters plz.. ..

lol

aren't they at max lvl??

bruh?? th is this paragraph

if u write like this then ur novel won't last even 100 chaps coz readers need interaction not inner monologues and u r repeating a lot of sentences and that's not something a reader would like. The reason I m reading is cause of new power concept and story otherwise I would dropped on the 1st chapter itself. So better improve the writing and there is lack of feelings in the lines it's like talking to a robot so better change that.

bro u use chatgpt right?!