Crimson_Joy

This has been my fav novel , So I think you did a amazing job

Ok This is my honest Review So far (On chapter 100) , This is my Point of view , I'm liking the story and everything but there are a few problem 1st At the start of the story you said "albeit" To many times it was getting annoying seeing that word , 2nd You didn't show other point of views Much but you have changed that now which is good in my eyes (example You showed Aliya's point of view at some point) And the other points I don't see much so everything is fine (in my eyes) This is the 2nd story I'm enjoying here , Still think you could have done a better job at the start because it was boring there but I see improvements

(Chapter 55) Hear me out this story was good at the start but I feels like it dropped very hard , Lets like the mc went dark for a dumbass reason like my guy didn't know how to fight and he out here killing people , I know his race makes him changes and shit but it feels like the change came a bit fast

Fr

Wild ending

This book is so enjoyable to the point it makes other books i read look bad, Everytime i try to read another novel my brain auto compares Them to this novel , i love this book and match and i want to see it go on

So relatable