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Eshal_Shahnawaz
Eshal_ShahnawazLv23yr
2021-07-19 19:26

The writing makes me feel like I'm there experiencing everything! Awesome writing skills and great character development too! I'll definitely say it's worth a read! Looking forward to more chapters!

Jacob Mornings

chimychimes
4.3
4 Chs

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really?? thanks a lot. am all red🤭😚🤯

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Eshal_Shahnawaz
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Aww...no problem!

chimychimes:really?? thanks a lot. am all red🤭😚🤯
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