Review Detail of Stevefpx in Temptation Chronicles

somehow i dont feel the anti hero vibes on mc. i feel the villain vibes more on the heroes. it feels contradictory tbh. it was nice though but it was a let down that such old man died and mc has no reaction. technically the old man was the first person that made the mc feel warm at least he has been kind. i was expecting more when it says anti hero tag but so be it. 3.4 for now. reason? the writing is average but still better than any novel (4) story development (i really cant feel thr villain vibes although mc is smart) (3) character design (technically, each of their character development is good but not better because mc was quite naive. he easily trust too much despite being bullied all his life (trust me, I'm a victim of bullying and i know pretty much their mindset. they wont trust too much) updating stability is better, good job! (4) as for world background, you did not state what their world was in. why is their heroes and villain and how such powers came to be so it lacks info. btw some of your plots are forced upon mc so it adds up to the rating.