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The thing I don't get about this novel is if almost all people have superpowers and only 1 percent is having none then why are they wearing costumes? I mean along the street people will still know your identity. E.g mc was known to be the son of a powerful hero but before he wears the costume people still knows him. I can almost imagine most of the people walking in the crowd with their costumes.
I actually rated it low for some reason but I think the greatest factor is the naivety and meekness of Mc. Imagine, Mc knows the cruelty of the world and suffered from 2 planes but he never learned his lesson. He wants to teach kindness? Mc did not even bother to know the past of his disciple first before giving them a guide. He is showing the kindness of the world but hides it's darkness. If the heroines she sooner meet are really naive or new to the world, it would bring more harm than good. I think Mc suffered too much to have that kind of brain problem. He was tortured, treated as trash but he never learned. This is pure idiocy. I'd rather have to see a strict, caring and fair Mc than seeing a hypocrite, and meek Mc. I can consider the factors such as a kind elder in the sect but having reach master and learned the cruelness of the world before he was reborn he should know better. Another thing is he has lived for so long! How can Mc had an idea that "oops my disciple pick up a treasure". He has no brain. He lives too carelessly despite claiming a minimum vigilance to the future events. I have no complaints if the heroines are sullied but at least make him less of a meek naive character.
It's hard to read. It was good at first but the Mc became the slave to the system. His increase in realm is so pointless. He can just buy his product and increase but the system makes him do task for it. Second thing is, it is far from good. So many error in grammar and spelling. Compare to any store novel, I can barely finish it. Mc has no real Power. The system is stupid. Many can just kill the Mc while he is out of his shop. His products are still the same and the system wants to earn millions with just that.
It's a the same with all other novels. Mc does not cut the roots of his troubles. Let it grow and harm him back. The grand elder is so indecisive. A stronger fist rules over anything. Imagine the trouble with his clan member can be solved if the grand elder banishes his son to another place than waiting for a ticking time bomb for his clan. He has an idea that his son is involved with the 3rd prince and he knows that It is a danger if one is involves with the royal family. The usual novels having powerful system and a lower iq Mc supporters to pave way for Mc . I can't believe that when he is keeping his relationship with his servant he can't even notice his surroundings and his relationship was found out. Please make it logical. Having 2 lives should at least give him a chance not to be naive
Author You do realize that a zombie belongs to the same class as undead while a wolf belongs to the class of a mutant animal. Well, it's just a bit confusing but it's okay. Having vampire blood and it was manifested when he was 12 should at least been observed by a vampire race considering that the 3 major races themselves might not be harmonious to each other. Well let's see I might edit my review.
2.6 pretty much every author there is in an op Mc. They try their best to nerf the Mc. Instead of limited, why not let him learn control? Control every fiber of his muscles to exert just the right amount of strength . Mc lose his past memories when you could just allow it. It was said that he will lose his memory about god but he should at least remember his past life. It was not part of the deal. Contradictory. Dropped it early.