Only took 2 chapters to realise that this novel isn’t good the first chapter has the worst introduction possible it’s extremely forced and feels awkward like the author was trying to make him sound harass and cool but failed miserably at it the edge is off the charts the chapter itself is also super rushed with the mc dying almost instantly with no explanation backstory or nothing just that he’s handsome it’s just well “I am dead” not in a self mocking way or a reflective and melancholy way just I’ve died. 3 sentences later 2019 years have passed no time skip it just happens then a god appears before the mc has to have a self monologue about how emotionless he is when no one asked. it just feels awkward and forced the whole 2 sentences of dialogue just felt robotic and the mc goes onto repeat how emotionless he is in a very edgy chunnibyou way he doesn’t come off as a cold hearted or emotionless professional assassin but more of a emo 12 year old having a chunnibyou episode in his room he’s no Intimidating or intriguing he’s just weird… Then his whole personality flips upside down the next chapter where he’s acting like a typical isekai protagonist who got reincarnated as a baby completely forgetting everything that happened to him and the fact he is supposed to be emotionless this is why I hate when authors tell but don’t show and hype up the protagonist just for him to act like a inexperienced immature idiot also the gramma is garbage I don’t get how this got so many views It’s a total dumpster fire better off not wasting your time 🔥🗑
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For the love of all that is blessed by grammar, please use some commas.
