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azertyuiop
azertyuiopLv53yr
2021-06-30 01:48

the story is good but the grammer is so bad i barely understood a single paragraph so i stopped reading. ..................................................................

Assassin in The Witcher

achile
4.0
101 Chs

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achile
achileAuthor

Thanks for the review, for the grammar I can't do much, I use Google Translate and Grammarly, I can't do anything else except having an editor.

3yr
azertyuiop
azertyuiopLv5

try to find one cause the concept of the story is great and so original.well as original as a fanfic could be anyway . open a discord account it should help u to find an editor or even new ideas if you ever need

achile:Thanks for the review, for the grammar I can't do much, I use Google Translate and Grammarly, I can't do anything else except having an editor.
3yr
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achile
achileAuthor

I'll think about the discord but I don't think many people will join it, but it's a good idea. I already have the next events in my header, I just need to think about how to write them.

azertyuiop:try to find one cause the concept of the story is great and so original.well as original as a fanfic could be anyway . open a discord account it should help u to find an editor or even new ideas if you ever need
3yr
Sculp
SculpLv12

try yo use yandex translation as it is way better than google translate and try to use it for every phagraph as it will be better like that.

achile:Thanks for the review, for the grammar I can't do much, I use Google Translate and Grammarly, I can't do anything else except having an editor.
3yr
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achile
achileAuthor

thanks, I will see to use it in the next chapter.

Sculp:try yo use yandex translation as it is way better than google translate and try to use it for every phagraph as it will be better like that.
3yr
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Sculp
SculpLv12

No problem.

achile:thanks, I will see to use it in the next chapter.
3yr
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Afsoares
AfsoaresLv14

thanks for translating this novel to english i love reading witcher fanfic and so far im enjoying this one a lot thanks you for posting it.

3yr

TheEpic_Gamer
TheEpic_GamerLv12

Only took 2 chapters to realise that this novel isn’t good the first chapter has the worst introduction possible it’s extremely forced and feels awkward like the author was trying to make him sound harass and cool but failed miserably at it the edge is off the charts the chapter itself is also super rushed with the mc dying almost instantly with no explanation backstory or nothing just that he’s handsome it’s just well “I am dead” not in a self mocking way or a reflective and melancholy way just I’ve died. 3 sentences later 2019 years have passed no time skip it just happens then a god appears before the mc has to have a self monologue about how emotionless he is when no one asked. it just feels awkward and forced the whole 2 sentences of dialogue just felt robotic and the mc goes onto repeat how emotionless he is in a very edgy chunnibyou way he doesn’t come off as a cold hearted or emotionless professional assassin but more of a emo 12 year old having a chunnibyou episode in his room he’s no Intimidating or intriguing he’s just weird… Then his whole personality flips upside down the next chapter where he’s acting like a typical isekai protagonist who got reincarnated as a baby completely forgetting everything that happened to him and the fact he is supposed to be emotionless this is why I hate when authors tell but don’t show and hype up the protagonist just for him to act like a inexperienced immature idiot also the gramma is garbage I don’t get how this got so many views It’s a total dumpster fire better off not wasting your time 🔥🗑

1yr
IWant2DieALilMore
IWant2DieALilMoreLv14

I haven't read this yet, BUT the possibilities of this match up lol is killer xD yo you are the bomb dude!

3yr
Blood_Prince
Blood_PrinceLv15

The story itself has promise, but if im being honest i couldnt even make it past the first chapter, the best way to describe why is its grammar, way to many repititions of tge word he, it annoyed me so much i dropped it. it could simply be because its a translated version from the authors original language, but either way i just couldnt read it because it annoyed me to much.

3yr
Sailova_Sailo
Sailova_SailoLv13

the cat school are already assassin even viper. so not very interesting

1yr
JTKey
JTKeyLv1

NOT BAD .................................................................................................................................................

3yr
Gaming_shadows
Gaming_shadowsLv3

Decent story but terrible writing, would not suggest anyone try read this as its barely readable [img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp]

1yr
YellowScarf
YellowScarfLv14

nice................................................................. . .................................................................. . .

3yr
22HB
22HBLv1

quisiera saber con quien es el interés romántico, asi no perder el tiempo ??? ademas, he de decir que empieza bien la historia.......qwwryiirewwerrrrewrw

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