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Blood_Prince
Blood_PrinceLv153yr
2021-09-05 20:26

The story itself has promise, but if im being honest i couldnt even make it past the first chapter, the best way to describe why is its grammar, way to many repititions of tge word he, it annoyed me so much i dropped it. it could simply be because its a translated version from the authors original language, but either way i just couldnt read it because it annoyed me to much.

Assassin in The Witcher

achile
4.0
101 Chs

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achile
achileAuthor

Thanks, I know, the main problem is grammar. The only way is to find a publisher but I don't know anyone who likes to read and is good at English.

3yr
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Blood_Prince
Blood_PrinceLv15

Thats understandable, the best way to find someone to help would probably be to post a chapter saying your looking for someone to help edit your english chapters, mention that its free or if you wanna pay them, thats up to you, and wait for someone to reply. when you get someone interested give them your discord or something like that, then give them a chapter to edit as a test and see if its any good afterwards and decide if he/she is gonna be the one to help you

achile:Thanks, I know, the main problem is grammar. The only way is to find a publisher but I don't know anyone who likes to read and is good at English.
3yr
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