the story is good but the grammer is so bad i barely understood a single paragraph so i stopped reading. ..................................................................

thanks for translating this novel to english i love reading witcher fanfic and so far im enjoying this one a lot thanks you for posting it.

Only took 2 chapters to realise that this novel isn’t good the first chapter has the worst introduction possible it’s extremely forced and feels awkward like the author was trying to make him sound harass and cool but failed miserably at it the edge is off the charts the chapter itself is also super rushed with the mc dying almost instantly with no explanation backstory or nothing just that he’s handsome it’s just well “I am dead” not in a self mocking way or a reflective and melancholy way just I’ve died. 3 sentences later 2019 years have passed no time skip it just happens then a god appears before the mc has to have a self monologue about how emotionless he is when no one asked. it just feels awkward and forced the whole 2 sentences of dialogue just felt robotic and the mc goes onto repeat how emotionless he is in a very edgy chunnibyou way he doesn’t come off as a cold hearted or emotionless professional assassin but more of a emo 12 year old having a chunnibyou episode in his room he’s no Intimidating or intriguing he’s just weird… Then his whole personality flips upside down the next chapter where he’s acting like a typical isekai protagonist who got reincarnated as a baby completely forgetting everything that happened to him and the fact he is supposed to be emotionless this is why I hate when authors tell but don’t show and hype up the protagonist just for him to act like a inexperienced immature idiot also the gramma is garbage I don’t get how this got so many views It’s a total dumpster fire better off not wasting your time 🔥🗑

I haven't read this yet, BUT the possibilities of this match up lol is killer xD yo you are the bomb dude!

The story itself has promise, but if im being honest i couldnt even make it past the first chapter, the best way to describe why is its grammar, way to many repititions of tge word he, it annoyed me so much i dropped it. it could simply be because its a translated version from the authors original language, but either way i just couldnt read it because it annoyed me to much.

the cat school are already assassin even viper. so not very interesting

NOT BAD .................................................................................................................................................

Decent story but terrible writing, would not suggest anyone try read this as its barely readable [img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp]

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quisiera saber con quien es el interés romántico, asi no perder el tiempo ??? ademas, he de decir que empieza bien la historia.......qwwryiirewwerrrrewrw