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breke_Henrique
breke_HenriqueLv12yr
2022-05-04 04:27

I thought it was really good until around 68, as soon as the kobold part started my interest in the story dropped I can already see him going around helping people he barely knows with nothing in return just because they'll do it for him, so the guy says that he shouldn't put them in danger, so he feels warm inside and helps them out, so they're friends forever and will likely stay that way forever. I think it would be better for him to go through the forest alone, marrying all kinds of living beings until he climbs the food chain, and if he helps someone he would have to give something in return, very good, it would also be good one time he finds a mate to the two to evolve together. (it was translated in google translate some parts may be wrong)

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Harith_TM
Harith_TMLv15

allert, contain mb spoilers. first of all, i want to thank author. this story is good and i usualy dont writte review, and if so its negative, this is one of my few revies with positive regards. 1. original, well its cliche as reincarnation or transmigration stories, but there is where cliche end. as in what mathew reincarnated, his behaviour is definitely not a cliche. 2. MC itself isnt overly OP with inteligence but you definitely cant get opinion he behave in stupid way, he use logic, and usualy decision he make is for himself but with high enough morality. Also his character isndeveloping, at start he was ok being alone, but as time goes it can be seen in imaginable way (its not clearly written by author - which is ok as you got the feeling) he enjoy living in company of kobolts, but still his his priority isnhimself which is natural so not over the line thinking you touch what i hold dear and he by plot armor destroy his enemies, thats not in there = appreciated) Next world itself is still in mystery as we are still in forest, but i gues it will all be ok, as for now nothing ridiculous, so by standart this story is written i bet it will be above avarage. Writtings, author do good job in describing thing enough, and reader also dont have feeling that author use words or describing things as for idiots and believe readers have some logic to imagine details, so its not overly wasting words. and its written enough qaulity for you not miss much only for once i didnt got if he after evolution has tail still or not but in later chapters his tail was still there (there suggestion for author, tail can be used for a lot of things and for holding in ssame ay as he use tongue, i always imagined he some day fell asleap as his tail hold some branch with head down well :D) so dont forget evolvy hia tail :D, well thats just suggestion, i await where you bring us along mathew in his jurney :)) only thing my review dont end in 5 start ratings is this: upload chapters, i couldnt give full as i just catch up to latest chapters so i ccant ive opinion how much annoy me for waiting for chapters or if its good updating. Story development i gave only 4, but its should be 5 but i cant give max as its still early only 100+ chapters and we are still in forest. ps.: whats ffore big good point is there isnt some female cliche (and as he is chameleon looking as kobolt its not dangerous there will be one, so not some guy who is followed some women who mysteriously keep getting stronger without some plots armors, so good to read story like that. i read novels for like 20 years now, and this one is potentionaly for me in top 10, its too early for that decision ffor e but still my word is, thank you author for the sstory rlly enjoy it.

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