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Abacus_Extreme
Abacus_ExtremeLv23yr
2021-07-22 13:35

Well written, it has an interesting system based on biomass, almost like chrysalis but not exactly. I recomend this to anyone who has enjoyed the chysalis novel and wants something new and not the same evolution system as the humdreds on the web. The writing quality was not the most outstanding but still a 4 and a half star, it comes with the newer stories and should get better overtime. The best thing about the text was that it was able to draw me in with its descriptions and describe to me the exact scene. The updating schedual is also something that comes with newer novels, but if this novel picks up traction the author might make the novel a scedual. Please dont drop it. The story development was at times a little dull, like how the was almost no action with the parents of the mc, or the fast developement that skipped some parts of the story. Overall, another 4 and a half. Continued in the commets.

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Abacus_Extreme
Abacus_ExtremeLv2

The character design was the shooting star. I enjoyed the fact that the mc was at the beginning of a new path when he became a monster. Overall a 5/5 The world was a bit on the laking for information, but it did have interesting moments like how when two insects were fighting, they made sure to not severly damage each other, creating a politics of monsters in a sort. 5/5 I enjoyed this novel and I am looking forward to the limetless chapters to come. I wonder what will happen when he gets more that one brain, if he does I suggest a wolfs because the mc can use its superior hunting and tracking instinks and senses to achive better results when in search of prey.

Abacus_Extreme
Abacus_ExtremeLv2

Best of luck to the author

darran_
darran_Author

The chrysalis reference is spot on because I do design the evolution system taking a huge inspiration from it since I'm an avid fan of the novel. But don't worry that the story will become a half-bake copy of the novel because the world building concept is quite different from it. For the writing quality, I'm still trying my best to improve and if it haven't got signifficantly better, I won't let the quality go down either I'm also planning to flesh out the character by giving a quick backstory of the MC later on. And the world will be explored more after the crocodile revenge arc, so stay tuned~ And Thanks for the in depth review! It really helped me to notice what things that I need to improve and what things I need to keep up. I really appreciate it!

ZombiePat
ZombiePatLv5

big Chrys fan so i am already hooked

Purevessel_User
Purevessel_UserLv2

great review

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Harith_TM
Harith_TMLv15

allert, contain mb spoilers. first of all, i want to thank author. this story is good and i usualy dont writte review, and if so its negative, this is one of my few revies with positive regards. 1. original, well its cliche as reincarnation or transmigration stories, but there is where cliche end. as in what mathew reincarnated, his behaviour is definitely not a cliche. 2. MC itself isnt overly OP with inteligence but you definitely cant get opinion he behave in stupid way, he use logic, and usualy decision he make is for himself but with high enough morality. Also his character isndeveloping, at start he was ok being alone, but as time goes it can be seen in imaginable way (its not clearly written by author - which is ok as you got the feeling) he enjoy living in company of kobolts, but still his his priority isnhimself which is natural so not over the line thinking you touch what i hold dear and he by plot armor destroy his enemies, thats not in there = appreciated) Next world itself is still in mystery as we are still in forest, but i gues it will all be ok, as for now nothing ridiculous, so by standart this story is written i bet it will be above avarage. Writtings, author do good job in describing thing enough, and reader also dont have feeling that author use words or describing things as for idiots and believe readers have some logic to imagine details, so its not overly wasting words. and its written enough qaulity for you not miss much only for once i didnt got if he after evolution has tail still or not but in later chapters his tail was still there (there suggestion for author, tail can be used for a lot of things and for holding in ssame ay as he use tongue, i always imagined he some day fell asleap as his tail hold some branch with head down well :D) so dont forget evolvy hia tail :D, well thats just suggestion, i await where you bring us along mathew in his jurney :)) only thing my review dont end in 5 start ratings is this: upload chapters, i couldnt give full as i just catch up to latest chapters so i ccant ive opinion how much annoy me for waiting for chapters or if its good updating. Story development i gave only 4, but its should be 5 but i cant give max as its still early only 100+ chapters and we are still in forest. ps.: whats ffore big good point is there isnt some female cliche (and as he is chameleon looking as kobolt its not dangerous there will be one, so not some guy who is followed some women who mysteriously keep getting stronger without some plots armors, so good to read story like that. i read novels for like 20 years now, and this one is potentionaly for me in top 10, its too early for that decision ffor e but still my word is, thank you author for the sstory rlly enjoy it.

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