Blood_Cloud

I like the story so far; it’s heavily focused on episodes from the *Grimm* series. Some people might not like that—since it’s basically the episodes retold in book form—but the author needs to cover this so readers who haven't seen the show understand the *Grimm* world's foundation. Once that groundwork is laid, the story should start introducing things that didn't appear in the series. I also like his power to enter other worlds and gain a new ability upon completing a mission there. I just hope he doesn't get an overpowered ability; it gets boring if he solves everything too easily. Plus, if he gets an OP ability but the author doesn't actually use it to resolve situations, readers lose interest. That’s why I appreciate it when an author carefully considers the abilities they introduce, making them interesting and fun to use in clever ways. I used Google Translate to write this.

I think that if he used the Rasengan, the person hit would turn into a stone frog due to the imbalance of nature's energy.

There's nothing to say, it's simply very good. I highly recommend reading this fanfic, and even though I don't like Classroom of the Elite, I really enjoyed reading this fic.

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I liked this ability; it's similar to the Quincy King's. The king's ability is to grant Quincy power and then have the power to recover the power he gave. So far, I'm liking how the protagonist's power works, but I hope he doesn't stray too far from it. His Bankai will probably be to remove all the powers of all the contractors to improve himself, and when he deactivates it, the powers return to them.

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