Well written, it has an interesting system based on biomass, almost like chrysalis but not exactly. I recomend this to anyone who has enjoyed the chysalis novel and wants something new and not the same evolution system as the humdreds on the web. The writing quality was not the most outstanding but still a 4 and a half star, it comes with the newer stories and should get better overtime. The best thing about the text was that it was able to draw me in with its descriptions and describe to me the exact scene. The updating schedual is also something that comes with newer novels, but if this novel picks up traction the author might make the novel a scedual. Please dont drop it. The story development was at times a little dull, like how the was almost no action with the parents of the mc, or the fast developement that skipped some parts of the story. Overall, another 4 and a half. Continued in the commets.

I personally like monster evolution stories and this looks like a book people who read fantasy will enjoy. Overall a good book with average writing quality, consistent updates and an mc who has an actual personality and does not just go around mindlessly becoming stronger.

This is a typical mc is reincarnated as a monster novel and the mc is the same naive, immature and one dimensional character that survives merely out of luck; normally. this wouldnt be that hard of a turn off but with the grammar being mediocre and the way we are reminded of his intelligence while he acts with the wisdom and problem solving of a kid starts to grate my nerves.

Please author if there is a scene in this book where he gains a human or humanish form have him do something with music I honestly don't care what but keep his dream even in a new form and new world, could be great motivation.

The quality of writing although not the best it makes it up with daily updates. The story although not too deep and unique (as of chapter 9) we have a goal and a basic idea of the world [ better than an average webnovel ]. All said and done I’d say it has great potential and is slowly moving towards its peak.

I read this story because someone said it's like Chrysalis. while the initial premise of this was true the more u read this story u realize that gem cant is compared to this coal. The initial plot was an interesting one but as it progressed, it became a brain drain. First, till about chapter 60 sum, Mc mentions his goal ....and my gosh it was sum bs. The system while helpful its like a cruth to the Mc while he somewhat figures stuff out. the system makes a lot of his growth irrelevant which to sum is nice but to me is boring. In Chrysalis most of his stuff was learned everything he knows or did was trial and error or he had to earn it. Simple communication with his own family was something he had to earn. but here mc is given that skill. there is no trial and error with him. it is just growth with the guidance of the system(boring after a while). His intelligence is quite questionable not totally dumb but not the brights bulb in the barn. This story is quite nice if u turn your brain off. Come here expecting anything more and you are in for a disappointment. All in it was just ok for me.

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The MC is so stupid it makes me seem like a genius. He doesn't eve acknowledge the fact that he is in another world, he is very slow and keeps apologising to pre-recorded messages and to things that are just exp bags.

This story is very well written, and overall and in interesting read that I think you should give a try. And if you've already read the description this won't be a spoiler. But I would have to say the best way to describe the story or at least how he evolves is like a chimera ant. And if you've watched Hunter x Hunter which you really should you know what that is. But overall it's a really good read and I do recommend. o((*^▽^*))o