A fun and interesting story that truly does has a lot of potential but is bogged down by poor grammar. If your looking for a story with consistently good grammar, leave now. To be frank this needs to be revised heavily as at points I am completely unable to decipher what’s trying to be said. However I will say that at times nice vocabulary the author utilizes leaves me puzzled as to how so many simple grammatical errors can be made (perhaps English isn’t their first language?). Nevertheless it’s still completely readable for the most part and has kept me interested thus far (ch 63). In terms of story the beginning was Simplistic yet fun with a somewhat fresh take on a system that wasn’t super OP right from the get go, yet provides the tools necessary to progress without any real plot armor. In addition the author does a great job of staying true to the MC’s hate for humanity while also not going over the top all the time. Seeing his restraint develop was very well done and makes his brutality all the better when restraint isn’t necessary. Looking forward, depending on how a set couple of characters are developed will decide on whether or not this story is truly a cut above the rest. All and all There has been a lot of good set up thus far and I find myself exited to read every new chapter.
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Did you say the MC hates humanity? Then I have to read the novel.
