Niquiito
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- Niquiito6 months agoReplied to Typeshitnakjda
You should put this in the story, describing it in better detail.
This book has been deleted. - Niquiito6 months agoCommented
There are few details. What is that cave?. What are the symbiotes and what do they do?. Does everyone have symbiotes or just that particular group?
This book has been deleted. - Niquiito6 months agoCommented
???
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Description of the fight is needed.
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Chapter 2 and 3 are too similar. Many meanings are repeated.
This book has been deleted. - Niquiito6 months agoPosted
First, short chapters and a lot of filler. Second, in this story EVERYONE is a good person, NO ONE has bad intentions. It's not realistic. Third, MC divulges his secrets to everyone. 130+ chapters and it's been less than 2 months. MC is too naive, too kind. When MC goes on a trip with companions, their names are NEVER mentioned.