Review Detail of val_the_mysterious in The Dark Sweetest(Nightmare Edition)

Item: The Dark Sweetest(Nightmare Edition)
Rating: 4.6

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The story concept is good and revenge is always a good motivator. The MC comes through, but its hard to connect with the other characters. Writing wise it could do with a good edit. The overall story is rough, but should shine with a good edit.

The Dark Sweetest(Nightmare Edition)

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Keep reading because I do go on to talk about the other characters and also that was just a short view of what yet to come but I not spoiling it so just keep reading.

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