Had an interesting beginning with a good, slow but sure, system. The mc worked hard and everything seemed cool but the author decided to ruin it by having the mc befriend Naruto before telling him everything (parents, kurama, etc) and then there were no consequences for it despite the author repeatedly pointing out that it was a bad idea and that the anbu or root would come for him for doing that exact thing. Odd way to ruin a story but it is what it is I suppose. (also like all terrible naruto fics he instantly befriended Kurama with no trouble lol)
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No trouble befriending Kurama? He established basic trust just by placing his own life in danger and promise that he will free him!
The MC doesn't have to worry too much about his actions' consequences due to the save & load function of his system
but there's no consequences
dude, this is just fanfiction. what do you expect?
Classic gary sue mc
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Gary Stu? IIRC he is kind, but not a perfect guy
Gary sue is a male character who experiences no growth because they face no problems(male version of Mary sue)
DuDE tHIs iS JusT a FanFicTIon WhAt dO yOU ExPECt.. duuude he's stating the points in which he thinks that could have been improved. Or do you want all fanfics to be of this quality?
Just keep reading man, its not that bad coz for me author can describe, make characters almost like original characters(like in anime or manga) and author can make MC have proper conversation with other characters(You know what I mean if you had read enough FanFic) not like almost fanfic were MC just had short conversation and characters from that fanfic will convinced and became MC bestfriend, follower, slave, etc. And the worst of it there are characters who out of Him/Her original characters.
yeah that is the problem no consequences. if he can avoid it and make use of save and load functions then its fine. but no. befriend Naruto out of the blue like literally. no consequences. despite 5 years old going left and right with clone in the middle of Konoha and uchiha place. no consequences. going into Hyuga place and saving the wife out of the blues literally. no consequences.
don't read this fan fiction. the author doesn't care about his readers
How do you Say this? Is a incredible fanfict!
Guyz, dont read fanfic if you want logic in it. There are thousands of thousands story books written by famous authors. Fanfiction signifies a fan basing his stories on a fiction along with his opinions on how the fictional story could be
