this is a poorly made phantasy without in-depth knowledge about naruto story. so many mistakes in fact for example: 1). in ROOT the members dont have any tongue seal. 2). Danzo is incredibly nerfed with lower iq.(acceptable) 3). Itachi and shisui are made brain dead idiot through character int stats nerf. 4). World characters reaction doesn't seem realistic but dumb.( it feels like dead characters without any internal struggle but a "YES MAN" and from Xianxia/chinese faceslap writing style format. 5). The gamer system is only to fill plot hole is understandable but poorly implemented. 6).Most importantly it does not have the naruto worldly vibe. But more leaning towards Chinese Xianxia/wuxia family fighting for power vibe. 7). the gamer system and MC growth heavily dependant on plot hole. Wherever any inconsistency found readers can only attribute everything on the system. Highly non balance and non realistic. After all the cringe /unrealistic dialogue, it makes me wonder since this writing style absolutely cannot be from the naruto world then why not just blow everything out of proportion? my advice is if you really cannot write an immersive naruto self insert then DONT. It would be better to stick with the gamer system for the world background generated by gamer system. THIS WAY>>the author can make as many cringy/unrealistic diaglouge more adaptable for readers.
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Basically, this is xianxia where there is a little young op master who at the age of 5 has already taken over the world, but has not yet received his harem from loli, I stopped reading somewhere on chapter 160, there is a lot of monologue and even more drama, and I don't like it, фанфик хорош но ты автор слишком много начал надрачивать кучу всякой чепухи
