Voidz_Zero

Holy shit! Over 700 comments on the first chapter? I’ve only seen this type of reception for those monsters of a Novel

Good things it’s not … right guys?

Gah diggity damn! Is it that bad?

Bro just come back yeh?

So after this, do you plan to take a break? Or do you already have something to do in mind? Honestly, this type of novel, crossover done right, is pretty good. So if you r going to do something again will it be crossover? Or something else?

One piece physique

I find this very entertaining, the dialogue flows extremely well, and the charcters bounce off each other as they would in their own reflective works. Their very true to themselves, that’s a big plus for me since a lot of the appeal to this type of work strongly depends on how close the author can capture the charcters essence. From what I’ve read, and I’ve currently read all available chapters available to me, his done an incredible job at capturing that essence and preserving their characters. I will not lie, sometimes there is an odd word in a perfectly normal sentence, for example, from where I’m at, one charcter is calling another one boss, now this wouldn’t rlly be a problem if circumstances call for it in a logical sense. As in, that boss, actually being your boss, and so on. But in the case here, it seems to be more of a placeholder for the actual name or otherwise than what a logical interaction between people with their own goals. Withholding info or not, in which in this case it’s not, since it’s not being properly used in the appropriate situations. Using that word for sarcasm and such I have no problem with, but it’s obviously being used as a placeholder for their name. If you see this author l, I hope that you can fix this issue in future chapters. That would help keep the reader immersed in the world and not make them wonder and think why that word felt off in said sentence. Other than that, this is, as I said, incredibly entertaining to read. Genuinely read this, you will not be dissatisfied nor disappointed. Especially if you like more villain MCs or approaches.

This is supringly entertaining. I’ll be supporting this novel from now on. Don’t disappoint me

………………”uncle” thrice In a row?

…”uncle” again?