Item: One Piece: Desperate
Rating: 1
Author: Tim_QQQ

Tim_QQQLv11yr

2023-11-12 11:19

the authors interpretation on character power is really non-canon and unjustified. the mc is a retard (kidnaps a CD for no reason but somehow Stockholm syndromes her), devil fruit is boring. i didnt read the entire novel so maybe the author pulls out some bs to change the fruit but why would u even bother writing about the bear fruit. thats it, the zoan bear fruit. it would be better just to write about a garp-type character who dosent have a fruit.

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