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Tandoris
TandorisLv43yr
2021-09-04 06:39

retard spamm 5/5 review so i give 1. Also the story is kinda good if you like hearthless Mc ( Kind of Reverend insanity style )

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IwishtoDie22
IwishtoDie22Lv2

I respect this

Celebiiiiiiiiiiiii
CelebiiiiiiiiiiiiiLv1

Max is 1000% not reverend insanity dude. That guy is so ruthless he wouldn’t even have subordinates Your review is completely pointless

Tandoris
TandorisLv4

Lol, have you ever read reverend insanity before? The Mc literally make sacrifice of other to gain power (same as in reverend insanity), manipulate the feeling of other for his benefit (same as in reverend insanity), lie to all faction (same as in reverend insanity), know the futur (same as in reverend insanity), the Mc is , as you said , ruthless (same as in... oh , reverend insanity), DO have subordinate that he manipulated without giving a F (same as, again, reverend insanity :/ ), make himself be seen as weak to be underrastimate during a long time (well well well, likes in reverrend insanity... what a surprise)... Do i need to continue? Or do you get the point?

Celebiiiiiiiiiiiii:Max is 1000% not reverend insanity dude. That guy is so ruthless he wouldn’t even have subordinates Your review is completely pointless
OmniFish
OmniFishLv1

though what you are saying is true but Mc still can't compare to Fang Yuan.

Tandoris:Lol, have you ever read reverend insanity before? The Mc literally make sacrifice of other to gain power (same as in reverend insanity), manipulate the feeling of other for his benefit (same as in reverend insanity), lie to all faction (same as in reverend insanity), know the futur (same as in reverend insanity), the Mc is , as you said , ruthless (same as in... oh , reverend insanity), DO have subordinate that he manipulated without giving a F (same as, again, reverend insanity :/ ), make himself be seen as weak to be underrastimate during a long time (well well well, likes in reverrend insanity... what a surprise)... Do i need to continue? Or do you get the point?
Tandoris
TandorisLv4

THAT is true, Fang Yuan is like the Ultimate hearthless protagonist but still, Max is "kinda" like him in method/style , and that was the term i used for the review

OmniFish:though what you are saying is true but Mc still can't compare to Fang Yuan.
JustSomeRetard
JustSomeRetardLv1

that last one smart tho

Tandoris:Lol, have you ever read reverend insanity before? The Mc literally make sacrifice of other to gain power (same as in reverend insanity), manipulate the feeling of other for his benefit (same as in reverend insanity), lie to all faction (same as in reverend insanity), know the futur (same as in reverend insanity), the Mc is , as you said , ruthless (same as in... oh , reverend insanity), DO have subordinate that he manipulated without giving a F (same as, again, reverend insanity :/ ), make himself be seen as weak to be underrastimate during a long time (well well well, likes in reverrend insanity... what a surprise)... Do i need to continue? Or do you get the point?
Tandoris
TandorisLv4

yeah it's smart , i'm just saying they do use more or less the same methods

JustSomeRetard:that last one smart tho
DaoistIszN4K
DaoistIszN4KLv1

I don't care. The goals and personalities are different. There is no reason for Max to sacrifice his friends, and Max is a person whose age is not 600 years old to see friendship as nothing. And if he didn't sacrifice his friends or was more evil, this would make Fang Yuan better? Why the comparison? What they lived is completely different, how can he be without any humanity and live bleak all his life just to look more evil what you do is a childish thing

Tandoris:Lol, have you ever read reverend insanity before? The Mc literally make sacrifice of other to gain power (same as in reverend insanity), manipulate the feeling of other for his benefit (same as in reverend insanity), lie to all faction (same as in reverend insanity), know the futur (same as in reverend insanity), the Mc is , as you said , ruthless (same as in... oh , reverend insanity), DO have subordinate that he manipulated without giving a F (same as, again, reverend insanity :/ ), make himself be seen as weak to be underrastimate during a long time (well well well, likes in reverrend insanity... what a surprise)... Do i need to continue? Or do you get the point?
Tandoris
TandorisLv4

okayyyyyy? I mean no offense but this comment was 1y old so that came out of nowhere lol, why are you angry at? What i was pointing at was the method and though process rather than goal so i don't really understand what is your complain. This had not even something to do with the morality question or who is the most evil/heartless , just point out that they do have similarity, and i genuinely fail to see in what way comparing 2 fictif character is childish. Yeah , max isn't 600 year old, does that stop him to litteraly brainwash his sister/village/ally? Not really. Does he make any genuine friend during the story? Nope, only pawn in his view or if you think that's not the case then sorry but you need to re-read this fanfic cuz it happen like ... non stop since start till the end. And i don't remember my past self writting anything about him being evil for the sake of being evil nor about fang yuan being "better" bc of what max did , like where does that part even come from ? Anyway, hope i made myself clearer about this obscure comment i wrote 1 year ago, if you still want to talk don't hesitate cuz i'm really curious of what happen to make you write this, have a nice day .

DaoistIszN4K:I don't care. The goals and personalities are different. There is no reason for Max to sacrifice his friends, and Max is a person whose age is not 600 years old to see friendship as nothing. And if he didn't sacrifice his friends or was more evil, this would make Fang Yuan better? Why the comparison? What they lived is completely different, how can he be without any humanity and live bleak all his life just to look more evil what you do is a childish thing
DaoistIszN4K
DaoistIszN4KLv1

Max is an ordinary man who has become in an imaginary world, so as long as he does not treat everything as a fantasy world and does anything without conscience, he is an ordinary man who is not evil. He is 600 years old and does not care about friendship or fun, so the comparison is completely wrong. He is in the end just an ordinary man. Why is he brainwashing? Those close to him will make him empty this has feelings in the end

Tandoris:okayyyyyy? I mean no offense but this comment was 1y old so that came out of nowhere lol, why are you angry at? What i was pointing at was the method and though process rather than goal so i don't really understand what is your complain. This had not even something to do with the morality question or who is the most evil/heartless , just point out that they do have similarity, and i genuinely fail to see in what way comparing 2 fictif character is childish. Yeah , max isn't 600 year old, does that stop him to litteraly brainwash his sister/village/ally? Not really. Does he make any genuine friend during the story? Nope, only pawn in his view or if you think that's not the case then sorry but you need to re-read this fanfic cuz it happen like ... non stop since start till the end. And i don't remember my past self writting anything about him being evil for the sake of being evil nor about fang yuan being "better" bc of what max did , like where does that part even come from ? Anyway, hope i made myself clearer about this obscure comment i wrote 1 year ago, if you still want to talk don't hesitate cuz i'm really curious of what happen to make you write this, have a nice day .
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

Is English your first language? Genuinely curious.

DaoistIszN4K:Max is an ordinary man who has become in an imaginary world, so as long as he does not treat everything as a fantasy world and does anything without conscience, he is an ordinary man who is not evil. He is 600 years old and does not care about friendship or fun, so the comparison is completely wrong. He is in the end just an ordinary man. Why is he brainwashing? Those close to him will make him empty this has feelings in the end
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