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AliWasTaken
AliWasTakenLv43yr
2021-06-02 12:13

Finally another fanfiction from my favorite author I'm really curious to see how this story will go and how will this connect to the other fanfictions

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Ballad
BalladLv5

Lol I was also hyped but I stopped once he decided to be a marine I just dislike those types of stories plus he has a boring fruit sad face

Xqzech22
Xqzech22Lv13

Honestly i like that he dosent have an op fruit makes it so he has to wOrk harder for his strength.

Ballad:Lol I was also hyped but I stopped once he decided to be a marine I just dislike those types of stories plus he has a boring fruit sad face
lightbringer_007
lightbringer_007Lv5

is it same as his previous stories where mc is smart,evil, manipulative,too much selfish only care about himself not even his friends ..or different.????

FACE_IS_LAUGHING
FACE_IS_LAUGHINGLv2

Praising him to much is a bit disturbing to the highest level. First point, he wants to have a mc does not have cheats yet he got DF, that is contradicting based on portraying his character even it is a ordinary devil fruit. Second as he is an author he also a reader when you read the first chapter(well I got hook up and thats good) but when he got the ordinary df well this is bad. There are many ways to make him weak to strong but bear or panda? This is not tales of demons and gods, maybe he will get a yin yang power to awaken his fruit? 😂😂 or he wields a bamboo stick? Who cares but really disappointing and you all praising him like a god but this fanfic is a big no no.

AliWasTaken
AliWasTakenLv4

wow that was a whole lot of nothing thanks for that

FACE_IS_LAUGHING:Praising him to much is a bit disturbing to the highest level. First point, he wants to have a mc does not have cheats yet he got DF, that is contradicting based on portraying his character even it is a ordinary devil fruit. Second as he is an author he also a reader when you read the first chapter(well I got hook up and thats good) but when he got the ordinary df well this is bad. There are many ways to make him weak to strong but bear or panda? This is not tales of demons and gods, maybe he will get a yin yang power to awaken his fruit? 😂😂 or he wields a bamboo stick? Who cares but really disappointing and you all praising him like a god but this fanfic is a big no no.
Amataratsul
AmataratsulLv15

Let me guess another semi sociopathic mc with way too much in the brains department who uses others?

MAZINO_NA
MAZINO_NALv2

KingRaiza
KingRaizaLv5

He is litteraly a brown bear, and he's strong, What's the problem?

FACE_IS_LAUGHING:Praising him to much is a bit disturbing to the highest level. First point, he wants to have a mc does not have cheats yet he got DF, that is contradicting based on portraying his character even it is a ordinary devil fruit. Second as he is an author he also a reader when you read the first chapter(well I got hook up and thats good) but when he got the ordinary df well this is bad. There are many ways to make him weak to strong but bear or panda? This is not tales of demons and gods, maybe he will get a yin yang power to awaken his fruit? 😂😂 or he wields a bamboo stick? Who cares but really disappointing and you all praising him like a god but this fanfic is a big no no.
Marc_19
Marc_19Lv11

aye yo guys does the author have a discord group if yes mind if i have the link?

Lv4

Its in the synopsis

Marc_19:aye yo guys does the author have a discord group if yes mind if i have the link?
Gods_Clown
Gods_ClownLv4

In which story is such a wonderful Mc

lightbringer_007:is it same as his previous stories where mc is smart,evil, manipulative,too much selfish only care about himself not even his friends ..or different.????
lightbringer_007
lightbringer_007Lv5

holy joker stories are great but he took too realistic approach and man I am not really into seeing reality check in a fanfic😆😆

Gods_Clown:In which story is such a wonderful Mc
Gods_Clown
Gods_ClownLv4

It‘s dropped but thanks

lightbringer_007:holy joker stories are great but he took too realistic approach and man I am not really into seeing reality check in a fanfic😆😆
covestar
covestarLv14

Spoiler of the fruit?

Ballad:Lol I was also hyped but I stopped once he decided to be a marine I just dislike those types of stories plus he has a boring fruit sad face
IDontKnowName
IDontKnowNameLv4

Did you ever find out?

covestar:Spoiler of the fruit?
covestar
covestarLv14

I don’t remember but I was some bs.. same as story..

IDontKnowName:Did you ever find out?
covestar
covestarLv14

I did but it was not good at all.. some be but I forgot, i think he was a crow or something.. a regular paramecia

IDontKnowName:Did you ever find out?
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