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WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv68mth
2024-05-11 06:43

First Review - Chapter 308 . . . A Book Worth Reading, It's a good Eastern Fantasy for anyone that likes this gener . ( Below things are all Personal Opinion) Pros - 1. Well Written With Few Mistakes in writing quality. 2. Good Power ups With Steady Pace , need improvement but Works. 3. Not biased on only one or two characters . 4. No overly done sensitive things for kids so kids can read as well . 5. Characters aren't 2 dimensional cons- 1. Same word mistakes for hundreds of chapters with no improvement . ( Ex: ConsOriginal that should be Conspiracy ) 2. Characters feel alive but none feel too important. 3. Lack of Minor details that create suspense or thrill . but the author did try can't deny. 4. World Building needs more work and details . that's it for now , I'll make another review later after throughout observation and reading there are more then 2000 chapters already after all .

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WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv6

Yes the MC is a Goodie Two shoes who just must help everyone like a superhero Gandi .

CloudBeneathMoon
CloudBeneathMoonAuthor

Thank you for the review!

unkwnplyr
unkwnplyrLv13

is the novel near end? how many chalptersare left or what the current percentage ?

CloudBeneathMoon:Thank you for the review!
CloudBeneathMoon
CloudBeneathMoonAuthor

It has entered the final section. My current estimation is around 200 - 300 chapters left. It can be more or less.

unkwnplyr:is the novel near end? how many chalptersare left or what the current percentage ?
kenan_kenan
kenan_kenanLv1

I hope you will continue with another good novel, author. I wish you continued success.

CloudBeneathMoon:It has entered the final section. My current estimation is around 200 - 300 chapters left. It can be more or less.
CloudBeneathMoon
CloudBeneathMoonAuthor

Thank you for your kind words. I already have a plan for it. However, I want to take a break from Eastern Fantasy genre for a while as I have been writing for years without stopping. In fact, I already wrote hundreds of chapters for my next Eastern Fantasy genre novel, but I will hold it for now. I will release it when I have more energy. My next novel, which will be launched soon, will be an technological urban genre. It is for my personal relaxation because I don't have to think of super complicated plots for it. Thank you for your supports. Have a good day!

kenan_kenan:I hope you will continue with another good novel, author. I wish you continued success.
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Sahin_Ahmed_5099
Sahin_Ahmed_5099Lv14

After 650+ chapters I'm back to give another review. ~Mc isn't stupid, he doesn't chase skirts like most of the Cultivation novel MC's. He is hardworking, shameless, shows kindness and doesn't show mercy to his enemies. ~Side characters who's their own problems and life. They are not there to only shine the MC but they are flesh out characters who has their own uniqueness. Character development is really good. ~World building is also a strong point of the novel. There are another world's ready to be explored, there are multiple continents with their own uniqueness. And you can expect much more in the future. ~ Enemies are strong, really strong with great backgrounds and has massive armies. There are more than couple of enemies that MC has to face before continuing his journey. One more powerful than the other. ~Battle scenes are really good. It takes his intelligence as well his strength to come out on the positive side of the battles. ~English is the the best but it's not the worst either with few grammatical errors. ~Romance has potential. Trust me on this but i see that author knows his stuff and you can expect a gradual building relationship between characters. ~It is a well paced story neither slow nor fast. ~MC has his plot armor but that will not make him OP, though it will give him an immense potential on his journey to the top.He isn't seeking strength for some b*lls**t reasons but to save his life and the lives of his subordinates. ~MC is not omnipotent he will make mistakes, he has his own flaws. But let me remind you without flaws there will be a limited space for character growth. Overall a very good gem of a novel.If you've read this far that give it a try you'll surely love it.

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