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Daoistddos
DaoistddosLv33yr
2021-09-28 15:33

Overall good concept and nice interaction between characters. But, plot progression is really slow. A lot of unnecessary chapters which you could skip and not miss anything. A lot of details which feel just the same but with different words.

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BabyFace_James
BabyFace_JamesLv13

yeah this is my main problem right now where im at its moving at a snails pace like its been like 15-40 chapters for just one day of events its like how long is one day in this series jeez. theres nothing wrong with skipping days im gonna continue reading but i can see why it doesnt have as many viewers as shows like shadow slave and supreme magus. the story progression and is slowing that any series ive read to date and ive read like 10-30 of em. im on chapter 510 and its dragging so friggin bad. the main character is so unrealisticaally and ridiculously strong that nobody in his universe can believe it and the time its taking him to get that strong is nonsensical.

BabyFace_James
BabyFace_JamesLv13

*is slower

BabyFace_James:yeah this is my main problem right now where im at its moving at a snails pace like its been like 15-40 chapters for just one day of events its like how long is one day in this series jeez. theres nothing wrong with skipping days im gonna continue reading but i can see why it doesnt have as many viewers as shows like shadow slave and supreme magus. the story progression and is slowing that any series ive read to date and ive read like 10-30 of em. im on chapter 510 and its dragging so friggin bad. the main character is so unrealisticaally and ridiculously strong that nobody in his universe can believe it and the time its taking him to get that strong is nonsensical.
BabyFace_James
BabyFace_JamesLv13

*is slower than

BabyFace_James:*is slower
JuJu_KK
JuJu_KKLv11

The author made him so strong from the beginning that he lost balance of his power

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