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tony_stark_3000
tony_stark_3000Lv53yr
2021-06-07 18:59

I really like you book it's really nice and a kind of new perspective my only doubt is there a haram and world travel please have both of them please because it's gonna be really fun I am travelling from one world to another and having a lot of female leads from those world's please this is a request

In Harry Potter AU with a system (Myriad Realms Shop owner)

tempestpanda
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235 Chs

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jojojajahelp
jojojajahelpLv4

please no harem it ruins stories, the chapters about the worlds already take up a large part of it and creating chapters developing multiple romance would push the storyline so much more behind

3yr
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tony_stark_3000
tony_stark_3000Lv5

you are lucky bro becouse it dosent have harem his only love r is Hermione Granger but the novel is fun it is also on mtl novel s or something but reading it in webnovel is much better

jojojajahelp:please no harem it ruins stories, the chapters about the worlds already take up a large part of it and creating chapters developing multiple romance would push the storyline so much more behind
3yr
jojojajahelp
jojojajahelpLv4

yeah this author is rewriting it to take out chinese propaganda

tony_stark_3000:you are lucky bro becouse it dosent have harem his only love r is Hermione Granger but the novel is fun it is also on mtl novel s or something but reading it in webnovel is much better
3yr
tony_stark_3000
tony_stark_3000Lv5

yeah he said it in starting chapters he really did good work

jojojajahelp:yeah this author is rewriting it to take out chinese propaganda
3yr
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Other Reviews
Hog980
Hog980Lv13

The MC is basically a side character for the Harry Potter book. He is supposed to be able to grow stronger the more he messes with canon and yet it barely changes. I get that he has the body of an 11 year old he is also in the Harry Potter universe in which magic exists. I’m tired of reading a summary of Harry Potter’s adventures from some random shop keepers point of view.

3yr

Nirerin
NirerinLv5

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Jmtxam
JmtxamLv1

I don't like the fact that the mc, who keeps saying that it has an adult mind, is so stupid and lazy. I'm not saying that the mc has to be op or a genius, just that anyone with an adult mind that knows that he will be targeted for his blood status and the fact that he is harry's friend, still doesn't try to learn has much as he can from a library full of magic books (I get that there are limits in power, but the mc didn't try to learn anything from outside of class because he was lazy and didn't know how to learn from books without a teacher of some sort holding his and to learn a spell, and didn't want to put in the extra effort). This isn't even counting the fact that you apparently need multiple magic books to learn just one spell since the books are so bad that a single book doesn't contain all the necessary information to learn a simple spell...

3yr
Darkoss
DarkossLv2

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Selisdega
SelisdegaLv2

one of the best Nerf system with kids reasoning and retard mc where the reward and mission recieve another nerf,. system base of chinese never ever good in calculation and bad with number, you got 10 million point only reward only to realize to learn trash skill you need to spend gazzillion point for the profound knowledge of the trash dao of solid trash foundation....

3yr
Brezer
BrezerLv14

the mc is a simp. there is nothing original here except the store and you don't see enough to make the story interesting . the mc goes into the idiot house and its cannon from then on as the mc as a semi sidekick. again nothing original . we all know how cannon goes. if you want to be original and actually write something don't put mc in the in the hero's house and make him a sidekick.

3yr
ray_rose
ray_roseLv15

giving 5 stars for mass release so i can binge read...ill give a full review after ive read enoguh chapters!! ...............................

3yr
CreatedKing
CreatedKingLv5

I read this book on lnmtl website. It is a decent novel with some interesting twists. The MC starts out as a pretty one dimensional character but grows over time. My biggest issue is kind of a spoiler so if you don't want to know then leave now. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Ok since you want to know the MC does not use abilities learned from different worlds efficiently. He learns Alchemy from the Rosen Maiden world, learns magic from WoW, gets plants from PvsZ, gets crafts and other things from LotR, technology from Fallout 4 and other stuff. Most of these abilities start out pretty interesting but just fizzle out over time. I would also like to see the MC travel to more worlds.

3yr
namyteo12
namyteo12Lv5

I have not read it yet but for what you want to do the apollo, I hope you keep doing this with other fanfics to see some interesting proposals that get dirty from racism .

3yr
CH405Kaiser
CH405KaiserLv6

The format of the chapters needs to be changed. Characters are all two dimensional that there isnt any depth other than what we know of the plot. MC is definitely stupid if he doesnt recognize Hermoine granger even after growing up and visiting her parents. This is not worth the read.

3yr
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