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Hog980
Hog980Lv133yr
2021-05-30 09:37

The MC is basically a side character for the Harry Potter book. He is supposed to be able to grow stronger the more he messes with canon and yet it barely changes. I get that he has the body of an 11 year old he is also in the Harry Potter universe in which magic exists. I’m tired of reading a summary of Harry Potter’s adventures from some random shop keepers point of view.

In Harry Potter AU with a system (Myriad Realms Shop owner)

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shillbear
shillbearLv14

95% of fanfic sadly

3yr
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TempestasUmbra
TempestasUmbraLv15

True, it’s the same with most FF in this site sadly. HP FF and One Piece FF are most of the time pure canon from a different point of view, which are just worthless in my opinion. Why make the effort to write such a fic when one can just read the original…?

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Zikiziki
ZikizikiLv11

I read a lot of fanfics of various media and HP fanfics are probably the worst in this regard. The authors seem to be terrified of interfering with canon in any meaningful way. As for One Piece FF. I would stay away from any FF in which MC joins straw hats because in that case even if the author wants the changes, it's really difficult to do anything that doesn't change things in outside arcs. One Piece is built on the idea of individual arcs separate from each other so it's hard to do anything. Still as long as MC doesn't join straw hats, the One Piece fanfics tend to be quite original. Even if actual cannon stays intact, the fact that the story has it's own storyline is more than enough.

TempestasUmbra:True, it’s the same with most FF in this site sadly. HP FF and One Piece FF are most of the time pure canon from a different point of view, which are just worthless in my opinion. Why make the effort to write such a fic when one can just read the original…?
2yr
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TempestasUmbra
TempestasUmbraLv15

I recently read a One Oiece FF calles The Lone Wolf from GodOfFreedom, it’s very AU but actually pretty good. You should try it for a fun read, if you have some time. It’s not too long and the MC is very consistent in his character and very OP. The story settung is also a bit more realistic than the original OnePiece, which may not be for everyone.

Zikiziki:I read a lot of fanfics of various media and HP fanfics are probably the worst in this regard. The authors seem to be terrified of interfering with canon in any meaningful way. As for One Piece FF. I would stay away from any FF in which MC joins straw hats because in that case even if the author wants the changes, it's really difficult to do anything that doesn't change things in outside arcs. One Piece is built on the idea of individual arcs separate from each other so it's hard to do anything. Still as long as MC doesn't join straw hats, the One Piece fanfics tend to be quite original. Even if actual cannon stays intact, the fact that the story has it's own storyline is more than enough.
2yr
Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4

afraid? more like lazy they don't wanna come up with a different story

Zikiziki:I read a lot of fanfics of various media and HP fanfics are probably the worst in this regard. The authors seem to be terrified of interfering with canon in any meaningful way. As for One Piece FF. I would stay away from any FF in which MC joins straw hats because in that case even if the author wants the changes, it's really difficult to do anything that doesn't change things in outside arcs. One Piece is built on the idea of individual arcs separate from each other so it's hard to do anything. Still as long as MC doesn't join straw hats, the One Piece fanfics tend to be quite original. Even if actual cannon stays intact, the fact that the story has it's own storyline is more than enough.
2yr
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Nirerin
NirerinLv5

Reveal spoiler

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Jmtxam
JmtxamLv1

I don't like the fact that the mc, who keeps saying that it has an adult mind, is so stupid and lazy. I'm not saying that the mc has to be op or a genius, just that anyone with an adult mind that knows that he will be targeted for his blood status and the fact that he is harry's friend, still doesn't try to learn has much as he can from a library full of magic books (I get that there are limits in power, but the mc didn't try to learn anything from outside of class because he was lazy and didn't know how to learn from books without a teacher of some sort holding his and to learn a spell, and didn't want to put in the extra effort). This isn't even counting the fact that you apparently need multiple magic books to learn just one spell since the books are so bad that a single book doesn't contain all the necessary information to learn a simple spell...

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Darkoss
DarkossLv2

Reveal spoiler

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Selisdega
SelisdegaLv2

one of the best Nerf system with kids reasoning and retard mc where the reward and mission recieve another nerf,. system base of chinese never ever good in calculation and bad with number, you got 10 million point only reward only to realize to learn trash skill you need to spend gazzillion point for the profound knowledge of the trash dao of solid trash foundation....

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Brezer
BrezerLv14

the mc is a simp. there is nothing original here except the store and you don't see enough to make the story interesting . the mc goes into the idiot house and its cannon from then on as the mc as a semi sidekick. again nothing original . we all know how cannon goes. if you want to be original and actually write something don't put mc in the in the hero's house and make him a sidekick.

3yr
ray_rose
ray_roseLv15

giving 5 stars for mass release so i can binge read...ill give a full review after ive read enoguh chapters!! ...............................

3yr
CreatedKing
CreatedKingLv5

I read this book on lnmtl website. It is a decent novel with some interesting twists. The MC starts out as a pretty one dimensional character but grows over time. My biggest issue is kind of a spoiler so if you don't want to know then leave now. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Ok since you want to know the MC does not use abilities learned from different worlds efficiently. He learns Alchemy from the Rosen Maiden world, learns magic from WoW, gets plants from PvsZ, gets crafts and other things from LotR, technology from Fallout 4 and other stuff. Most of these abilities start out pretty interesting but just fizzle out over time. I would also like to see the MC travel to more worlds.

3yr
namyteo12
namyteo12Lv5

I have not read it yet but for what you want to do the apollo, I hope you keep doing this with other fanfics to see some interesting proposals that get dirty from racism .

3yr
CH405Kaiser
CH405KaiserLv6

The format of the chapters needs to be changed. Characters are all two dimensional that there isnt any depth other than what we know of the plot. MC is definitely stupid if he doesnt recognize Hermoine granger even after growing up and visiting her parents. This is not worth the read.

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