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2022-01-10 14:50

This story is really good. The fact that the author used an original character from the manga as the MC of this story was pure genius as far as I'm concerned, and as a result, the changes that occur in the story really feel natural. Looking forward to how this story will play out in the future.

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I like it, but I don't see a point in Naruto 2.0. He really cant do much with MC 1. In this world, The version of Naruto would be so much weaker. Chakra doesn't / isn't supposed to exist (Cuz there's no Kayuga), therefore, no Chakra. That means no senjutsu, no sage of six paths to pave the way for "Naruto". Even more so, "Naruto" shouldn't be this strong. Uzumaki isn't a clan here, Kurama doesnt really exist, and he wasn't or Shouldn't be as pressured, after all he's not handling the responsibility of saving the world / saving the villages. He wouldnt or shouldnt grow as fast. With clan bloodline, and Kurama (Who is a little like dark ​shadow, has its own thoughts) and Chakra, that would actually be three quirks. Going any further would make it four. Besides, the original Naruto cant do anything to something not physical anyways (ex: Obito who only relied on Kamuii). So why is he here, if hes no relivent to plot?? 2. "Naruto" in this world has no plot armour. If he did, then It wouldn't make sense for Izuku to have OFA. From what you've written so far, it seems "Naruto" has a simular personallity to the original. Reckless and brash. If there was no plot armour the original, I really doubt if Naruto would even have the skills to be Chunin, even with Uzumaki heritage. 3. No talk-no-jutsu. He has no tragic pass. "Naruto" has a pretty normal family, no clans and ninjas after him, no corrupted higher-ups onto him, and no 9-tail rampage. MC had her faith in heros at a young age, along with her brother. Sympathy in the plot would be incredibly forced.... So yeah, why does this "Naruto" exist this time?

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