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Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv44yr
2021-05-15 13:49

The grammar has small errors apart from that the story is interesting so what I've been reading the story is going to make it entertaining ..........

In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System

SupremeCookie
4.8
151 Chs

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SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthor

Author's shameless review here. This fanfiction is my first story so feel free to correct my mistakes so I can make this fanfiction better. Thank you.

4yr

BeautifulBastard
BeautifulBastardLv5

longer chapters and less time skips would be good but overall is going well because of the "PLOT" ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).   ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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Uchiha_Rao
Uchiha_RaoLv3

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee you should be more explicit in R18 scenes can't wait till mc bangs kushina senseless and do mikoto too

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daoistofspacetime
daoistofspacetimeLv14

Im going to be honest. Looking for a deep and interesting plot? not for you. Looking for some intense character development? not for you. This is just a fun read with some comedy, s*x, and an easy to understand plot. Enjoy as a casual read.

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Exargna
ExargnaLv1

Extremely boring fan fiction. The characters are banal NPCs. The dialogues between the characters are stupid and monotonous, I constantly see praise for the main character there. The author, it seems, has never met a girl, relationships are not built like that, well, no, at 6-10 years old to arrange a "sexy" massage, from what do girls end up? What kind of nonsense is this? Why are there so many spam reviews without any normal criticism? Although what do I expect from working in webnovel, especially with the tag "harem".

3yr
Ayanokoji_Kiyopon
Ayanokoji_KiyoponLv2

BEST NARUTO FF, all things are included 1) op mc 2) no ntr or drama 3)lemons 4)all best girls 5)comedy top notch 6)nice mc, not those emo or antihero types or cold and indifferent or the one who just have one night stands. 7)author interacts regularly. I am rereading it from ch1 hehe~ hope that you will keep posting and would not stop. LOVE YOUR FF

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IwantToLive
IwantToLiveLv3

this ff is awesome lol,the writing, the Character design and World background, overall 5.0 but can you make the Chap long? just suggestion 😃 and the picture of this ff is trash lol just change it please to catch readers attention ☺️

3yr
shyfix291
shyfix291Lv5

keep going author[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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looooooolLv4

Very good story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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lucifer_pendragon
lucifer_pendragonLv14

Honest review after reading this, The thing is mc becomes trap and gets f****d by naruto,sasuke,itachi,madara,orichumaru this book is only for M's and traps . . . . . . .

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