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Review Detail of DaoistCaio in Naruto : The Wind Calamity

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DaoistCaio
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I read up to chapter 210 and was sadly disappointed by the MC's cowardice. spoiler He had an uchiha friend who later in the story was killed in the massacre, something the MC could have avoided, but he chose not to go save and collect sharigan, he even had the audacity to stand in front of her grave and pretend to be sad . What good are all these training arcs if he can't even save a friend (try)? The fanfic is good but the MC is one of those emotionless MC's that just runs after their goals without even looking at their childhood friends or teammates.

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Naruto : The Wind Calamity

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Horizon209
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Oh, so he decided to just not save her. Drop. It doesn't make the mc cooler, just psychotic and someone who has no morals.

Horizon209
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Thanks for the spoiler!

NOONE_SLEEPINTOKYO
NOONE_SLEEPINTOKYOLv1NOONE_SLEEPINTOKYO

yeah . Left the fic for the same reason

jok3r_CZE
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i read up to chapter 205 and dropped it for the same reason.

Tanuki36
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I completely agree with you there. The MC isn't even emotionless, he clearly develops relatiols with other ninja (like Mieko :( ). the author even made her have a crush on him. It would have been okish if that was for character development but the author just skips all of it.

SuSunnyGM
SuSunnyGMLv4SuSunnyGM

I dropped this novel after Chapter 203. disappointed MC; his personality is boring. At first, I thought he was calm and collected, but then I realized I felt no emotion at all after reading 200 chapters. Try reading Chapter 400 and still feel no emotion to start to like this MC....

ParagonDaoOfBS
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Same here

Ugalblat12_1_2
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Same this type of mc that only is after strength and is a coward in anything remotely dangerous feels boring and can’t attach yourself with the character .Fujin(the mc is the worse part of the novel) the rest is a 10 but it’s hard to read after you find out he isn’t cool and collected just emotions less and goal driven for strength (like what’s the point of being strong if your alone bruh)

lRyuji
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I think what makes this matter about him not saving her worse, is the fact he somehow decided to steal that priest's body and somehow can do it without much difficulty, though despite all of its issues, what makes it harder for me to actually enjoy even what I find good about this one, are the training montages because, by god, they are a little too much, to the point that I believe at least 50% of the story is him training.

Molten_Potato
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what do you even expect him to do? Fight Itachi with barely jounin level strenght

Ali_Asgar_8008
Ali_Asgar_8008Lv2Ali_Asgar_8008

Guys , the reason he did not save her because he was afraid she would become sasuke 2.0 and you know once uchiha,s awaken mangakyo sharigan it is an instant buff, imagine a psychotic uchiha with mangakyo would have caused serious damage she would definitely learn about her clan ,s coup and would against the leaf . Thus mc did not want to deal with all of this although cruel is the best choice , Danzo would be alerted and would plot against him Danzo is no joke, you know how he killed Shishui with little to no reparation for it ,killing fujin would be child,s play for him and hiruzen would just turn a blind eye so both of would die Don't hate mc for it was not because of itachi but because of danzo and his lack of power at that time if it happened with mc,s current power level I think he would definitely save it a uchiha is a powerfull ally So guys Don't hate the fabric for this decision ,hate danzo according the author made the logical decision there would too much trouble to save her .

Ali_Asgar_8008
Ali_Asgar_8008Lv2Ali_Asgar_8008

Bro, he was not that powerful first off bow lets say even if he saves her and obito and itachi don't care and let her live . Danzo ordered the annihilation of the uchiha clan so do you really think she would be safe and not die like shisui it would child,s play for danzo and mc would also come under danzo,s radar and would have lot of trouble Spoiler Later in the story mc claims retribution Currently danzo has lost all standing only has 11 root nins a laboratory no standing in the council and hiruzen is ready to kill him as he hold,s fujin in better regard .

Ali_Asgar_8008
Ali_Asgar_8008Lv2Ali_Asgar_8008

I hope you read the fanfic if you are leaving for this reason, if you still leave for this reason I think you just wanted to see Fujin x mieko ship But sadly it is not and was mentioned earlier no relationships

Ali_Asgar_8008
Ali_Asgar_8008Lv2Ali_Asgar_8008

Like you are not afraid of dying There are 2 types of people who are not afraid of dying 1) Idiots 2) People with heroic and patriotic goals He is not brain washed and thus does not believe in risking your life no matter what latter when he is fighting with darui first time he has thrill of battle and wants to fight and he is not afraid the chaos he caused in suna caused rasa to come for him but he still did not stop he went toe to toe with elite jounin of suna,against roshi and Iwa squad, Akatsuchi and specially trained Iwa squad . Later he becomes powerfull enough not be killed even by s ranks so not giving examples

Ugalblat12_1_2:Same this type of mc that only is after strength and is a coward in anything remotely dangerous feels boring and can’t attach yourself with the character .Fujin(the mc is the worse part of the novel) the rest is a 10 but it’s hard to read after you find out he isn’t cool and collected just emotions less and goal driven for strength (like what’s the point of being strong if your alone bruh)
Ali_Asgar_8008
Ali_Asgar_8008Lv2Ali_Asgar_8008

They were only together for 6 months that too never had any really touching. or emotional moments except that one with mieko against a priest (Jashin follower) The orphanage kids had no bonds with him The only bonds he has can be send is with maybe his sensei Senju rRenjiro and Hiruzen (greedy relation ship) and naruto (for fun and future help)

Ali_Asgar_8008
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You should not complain for that author already gave a disclaimer no relationships and it was a very logical decision from mc,s side

Tanuki36:I completely agree with you there. The MC isn't even emotionless, he clearly develops relatiols with other ninja (like Mieko :( ). the author even made her have a crush on him. It would have been okish if that was for character development but the author just skips all of it.
Ali_Asgar_8008
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Idk about you but I find it thrilling maybe different taste then you should pursue some other fanfic where you are enthralled by the mc or fanfic

Ugalblat12_1_2:Same this type of mc that only is after strength and is a coward in anything remotely dangerous feels boring and can’t attach yourself with the character .Fujin(the mc is the worse part of the novel) the rest is a 10 but it’s hard to read after you find out he isn’t cool and collected just emotions less and goal driven for strength (like what’s the point of being strong if your alone bruh)
Rishav_Saha_1096
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trampling on other's resolve and watching the hopelessness flash through their eyes?

Ugalblat12_1_2:Same this type of mc that only is after strength and is a coward in anything remotely dangerous feels boring and can’t attach yourself with the character .Fujin(the mc is the worse part of the novel) the rest is a 10 but it’s hard to read after you find out he isn’t cool and collected just emotions less and goal driven for strength (like what’s the point of being strong if your alone bruh)
Desire96
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That's too risky, first of all he doesn't have formed any bonds with her as he was on team with her for few months, so risking his life for her is just illogical thing... He knew that she is gonna die so he distanced himself from his teammates from day 1, plus collecting sharingan? are you expecting him to have plot armour and not be discovered by root nins or anbu's patrolling?? he didn't had a particular date or time of when it will happen and even if it did, chances of retrieving a sharingan were very low, it's just illogical to risk too much for practically nothing... why would he risk trying to gain a sharingan ?? awakening Ms is not everybody's cup of tea, if it was then Uchihas would be the one ruling the world... YOu have been just spoiled by fanfics making Mcs awakening MS, it's just too illogical...