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She died bruh. Imagine spending almost 200 chapters reading about a character only to be killed while the mc just grabbed the sharingan. The mc is frankly a coward, a bit psychotic, and there's almost no character development since the mc is simply heartless. Also, the mc is talented as fuck to the point that he is too strong compared to his peers. Despite all that training, he didn't save her. The mc in reverend insanity is a psycho but at least he waits for his allies to betray him but this mc didn't even care. That is a sign of no moral and principles, a character that is too cold to the point that's annoying. This is my opinion so if you like this novel, more power to you! as for me..I'll head out
Oh, luckily i skipped. She really died huh...i thought at least he would do something but I guess the mc is too much of a coward and frankly spineless.
Both of them are different. Cain's system is a more a naturing type, the type that gives the mc power and boosts permanently every time he achieves quests and milestones. Meanwhile, the primal sin strictly gives a power up temporarily in exchange for sanity. The primal sin is more powerful in a fight but the system is more powerful in gaining power over time.
I guess so. Despite being quite a cliche, the cousin has the backing of the General, which is one of the strongest people besides the Duke. Also, he's more talented than Lawrence and most of the higher-ups would rather have him as the heir. Indeed, the Duke wouldn't stand still if this happened to his son but he can't directly condemn the cousin. Unless Lawrence dies, the Duke can't do anything drastic to his nephew. Added bonus, the cousin can control the wind element, one of the unspoken criteria to be a heir of the Aenir Family. Still, i agree it is cliche, i would try my best to lessen the use of cliches in this novel
A shameless review from the author itself. Just want to address this. There would be no harem. Despite using cultivation for its power system, The mc won't be able to mow down enemies that have a higher cultivation level than him. He would use his knowledge from reading the novel to gain every advantage he can to defeat stronger enemies. Additionally, the side characters, especially his allies won't just be a character whose use is to be shocked all the time whenever the mc does something relatively cool. They will grow stronger with the mc and are essential to the story and to the goals of the main character. Please comment if you see anything that should be criticized so I can improve this novel.
Thanks, i'll rewrite this anyway but thanks for the suggestion!