SexyYoungMaster

But do the glass swords have the same affect??

But if it is, maybe he has to take the step to the next realm, and when his energy is ‘alive,’ it avoids the heavens detection.

Maybe that’s why is had a bad feeling looking at his impure energy. But it’s probably not that.

But pretty substandard for someone who took a fucking immortal herb

This must be translated wrong

After immediately accepting the template he made a shallow gash with a flimsy branch. 3 months later with a wooden blade, and he can only make a another shallow gash, albeit somewhat bigger? Even if the tree is ‘massive,’ the other one was large too, and shouldn’t make a big difference to begin with. Idea for the template and this kind of progress sucks. Go without it.

I could see how my wording threw you off. Maybe if I used ‘can’ or ‘would you consider’ instead of ‘could,’ it would have been better.

No im sorry for being rude i was hangry at the time

First off, it was an effing question, not criticism. If it was, I’d by going after the author or mc’s character. You mixed up criticism and critiquing you knitwit. Second off, I was just asking if he could just format it differently in the future, absolutely no harm at all. I didn’t ask him NOT to put it in.