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Trent_4485
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2021-09-18 10:36

Not a very unique idea, which isn't necessarily a bad thing if you make it unique through good character and plot development, but the 'protagonist' is simply bad...I don't have another word to describe it. The story starts off by giving a reasonable explanation for how the 'protagonist' ends up the way he is, and his abilities are fun to follow along with, but as I read, I just find that I hate the main character more and more. He is a 10 year old child that didn't have guidance and ended up psychotic, which is something that can reasonably happen, but its simply an unpleasant read because of his awful personality and characteristics. Having a main character that just goes around killing people is simply not appealing to me. perhaps he gets redemption later on where I have not read, but I already quite dislike him as a character and all in all it has got me bored enough to stop reading. I'm sure some people would enjoy having an irredeemable main character like this, but I dont. Usually when I enjoy a story with a main character such as this, there are other aspects that make it worth reading like comedy or uniqueness, but this doesn't seem to show signs of such yet. Again, I'm sure this kind of story is appealing to some people but I personally do not reccomend.

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Bacho_Bacho
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he won't get redemption arc but his character development is great. he is more calm and smart and has better self control

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