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2021-09-08 14:46

It's pretty clear the author doesn't understand how people act. Over ninety percent of characters act like deranged psychopaths, even ordinary civilians. The protagonist is also ridiculous. He is, by far, the most evil and crazy protagonist I've seen.

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Demonic_angelAuthor

Or maybe you don't understand that it's a fictional world and stop comparing this world and people to your world?

DaarkXLv4

It is what it is, Everyone’s got different taste.

Pochi_SanchezLv3

Is like he believe that if peoples with superpowers exist they will be heroes, wrong they probably will be criminals

Demonic_angel:Or maybe you don't understand that it's a fictional world and stop comparing this world and people to your world?
Daoist_RubenoLv11

You make every single antagonist Mc meets cardboard, puppy kicking villain to justify Mc murders. Every single time Mc meets enemy he will become copy paste of the same arrogant, insulting, deranged cardboard. Don't justify your lack of how psychology works with some lame excuses.

Demonic_angel:Or maybe you don't understand that it's a fictional world and stop comparing this world and people to your world?
BattleformLv5

you made every character that the MC meets a psychopath so that you can justify the MC killing them

Demonic_angel:Or maybe you don't understand that it's a fictional world and stop comparing this world and people to your world?
Demonic_angelAuthor

That sounds like an over exaggeration. The battle before his House. The enemies weren't "Psychopaths." The people in the restaurant weren't, "Psychopaths." just because they tried to give the kid to authorities. The people after him aren't, "Psychopaths." Either you have a shallow definition of psychopath, or every minutely bad or grey person is a Psychopath for you. In any case, this doesn't seem like a story for you. Hope you find what you're looking for.

Battleform:you made every character that the MC meets a psychopath so that you can justify the MC killing them
BattleformLv5

well yeah, I was exaggerating, I don't really like typing a long comment.

Demonic_angel:That sounds like an over exaggeration. The battle before his House. The enemies weren't "Psychopaths." The people in the restaurant weren't, "Psychopaths." just because they tried to give the kid to authorities. The people after him aren't, "Psychopaths." Either you have a shallow definition of psychopath, or every minutely bad or grey person is a Psychopath for you. In any case, this doesn't seem like a story for you. Hope you find what you're looking for.
Konner_MorrisLv15

I think what the op meant was, in a reasonable society, if a child walks into, say a restaurant with a dirty hospital gown, that person would be given some food to eat. In that same way if I road my bike in hot temperature, realized I forgot some water, I could easily go into a gas station or restaurant and get some water. It just feels weird how the entire restaurant went aggro on him the moment he entered. It maybe would make sense if the MC was acting rude or something arbitrary like that, but even then that didn't happen. Like this world seems straight out of mad max. The next town over there's an old man getting gun down right outside of his house cause of some debt? There's no oversite over a federal medical hospital? The city were the greatest heros live is run like its some poor run down city where you need gangs and protection money? The world does feel like it's disconnected from logic or reality. Which isn't a bad thing, just makes the story hard to get invested in when we have some FBI hit squads running around the world killing everyone and anyone. also yea the Main Character is a super psycho that deserves an award for how deranged he is.

Demonic_angel:That sounds like an over exaggeration. The battle before his House. The enemies weren't "Psychopaths." The people in the restaurant weren't, "Psychopaths." just because they tried to give the kid to authorities. The people after him aren't, "Psychopaths." Either you have a shallow definition of psychopath, or every minutely bad or grey person is a Psychopath for you. In any case, this doesn't seem like a story for you. Hope you find what you're looking for.
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