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warrock4862
warrock4862Lv53yr
2021-07-31 04:00

The expectations I had from the title and the summary was one and the actual content was just not what was expected and not in a good way either. This is one of those click-bait novels that promises a fresh concept but infact it's just the same old same old with different character names. The integration of technology and cultivation seems so misplaced and unnecessary. The author has very little knowledge on how to develop the story, when the protagonist is actually a 100 year old man. By the current chapters, the author has talent in writing a excellent standard cultivation novel with the usual standard MC with cheats. But a novel with a new concept sadly no.

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SNS27
SNS27Lv3

Dude just say that you dont like the novel and leave As you’re only gonna make more people not read the novel which is hella good to me and countless other people There’s no need to say that its clickbait or that its bad Just be like a normal and proper human being and just say that the novel doesn’t fit your taste

Noire_Nova
Noire_NovaLv12

That’s what a review is. I don’t see any problem with expressing your view in regards to a text. It’s not like people expect to find objective information in a REVIEW of all things. I don’t think it needs a disclaimer. If people are dissuaded from reading the work after reading this review, then all is as it should be. That’s what reviews are for. Besides, reviews are meant to provide helpful information so that the author can attempt to improve upon their shortcomings. Suffice it to say that simply saying that something ‘doesn’t suit your tastes’, like a ‘normal proper human’ is idiotic and completely meaningless.

SNS27:Dude just say that you dont like the novel and leave As you’re only gonna make more people not read the novel which is hella good to me and countless other people There’s no need to say that its clickbait or that its bad Just be like a normal and proper human being and just say that the novel doesn’t fit your taste
SNS27
SNS27Lv3

Are you kidding me- He literally said that it was clickbait and didn’t offer any good advice so how is thay helping the author??? Plus The author literally never looks at his reviews

Noire_Nova:That’s what a review is. I don’t see any problem with expressing your view in regards to a text. It’s not like people expect to find objective information in a REVIEW of all things. I don’t think it needs a disclaimer. If people are dissuaded from reading the work after reading this review, then all is as it should be. That’s what reviews are for. Besides, reviews are meant to provide helpful information so that the author can attempt to improve upon their shortcomings. Suffice it to say that simply saying that something ‘doesn’t suit your tastes’, like a ‘normal proper human’ is idiotic and completely meaningless.
SNS27
SNS27Lv3

And it isnt idiotic compared to someone saying that its clickbait sithout offering any good advice

Noire_Nova:That’s what a review is. I don’t see any problem with expressing your view in regards to a text. It’s not like people expect to find objective information in a REVIEW of all things. I don’t think it needs a disclaimer. If people are dissuaded from reading the work after reading this review, then all is as it should be. That’s what reviews are for. Besides, reviews are meant to provide helpful information so that the author can attempt to improve upon their shortcomings. Suffice it to say that simply saying that something ‘doesn’t suit your tastes’, like a ‘normal proper human’ is idiotic and completely meaningless.
Noire_Nova
Noire_NovaLv12

True, but given that it is a review - a showcase of one’s personal opinions in regards to a product - such things are within acceptable parameters. After all, there is no knowing what factors contributed to the end result. Perhaps the reviewer got exposed to a series of different works, which when compared to this work, evoked this reaction. One can’t know these things, which is why complaining about not posting them in the first place does more harm overall than it does benefit anyone. As long as a review provides insight into a reader’s impression of a work/product, it fulfils the basic conditions for a review to be considered ‘worthwhile’.

SNS27:And it isnt idiotic compared to someone saying that its clickbait sithout offering any good advice
Nerosox
NerosoxLv15

the point of reviews arent just to "help" an author, its to give their personal opinions of the novel.

SNS27:Are you kidding me- He literally said that it was clickbait and didn’t offer any good advice so how is thay helping the author??? Plus The author literally never looks at his reviews
SNS27
SNS27Lv3

Meh

Nerosox:the point of reviews arent just to "help" an author, its to give their personal opinions of the novel.
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

my good sir.... I feel you don't understand what a review is. we write and read each other's reviews so we don't end up wasting money on a novel who's true concept doesn't interest us. if ppl just say "I don't like" or "I like" there's literally no frame of reference and we'll inevitably end up reading a few dozen chapters before deciding if we like it or not. I prefer to read through the reviews and if enough reviews say similar negative things that I don't like, I'll just pass and look for something else.

SNS27:Dude just say that you dont like the novel and leave As you’re only gonna make more people not read the novel which is hella good to me and countless other people There’s no need to say that its clickbait or that its bad Just be like a normal and proper human being and just say that the novel doesn’t fit your taste
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

the reviewer doesn't have any compulsion to give advice to the author. there's honestly no reason for them to do so, especially if they drop it. a review is just to put your personal opinion on a novel out there to potentially benefit other readers

SNS27:And it isnt idiotic compared to someone saying that its clickbait sithout offering any good advice
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Time for a shameless review. Here, there will be some answers about the story. 1. Will there be a harem? Answer: No there won't be. 2. Will the MC get younger? Answer: Yes, he will get younger physically. You know, since he cultivates immortality, the stronger he gets, the younger(physically) he will be too. (Quasi-spoiler?) 3. Will it be updated regularly? Answer: Yes, it will be updated regularly. But sometimes, there may be a reduction. 4. Is his system annoying? Answer: No. His system is the silent type. Generally, it doesn't talk, it only gives out text. 5. Will the system force the MC to do something? Answer: No. It will at best put a mission. There may be penalties in the future, but fret not, those penalties won't threaten the MC's life nor his power. 6. How does the system work? Answer: This system won't force the MC to do anything as I said above. The only way the MC can get stronger is by cultivating strong people. But maybe there will be a slight change to it in the future. Btw, he also gets stronger by cultivating himself too. 7. Is the MC stupid? Answer: Lol, in almost all novels, MCs are not stupid. My MC is an old monster, therefore, he's not stupid. The side characters are not people who will come to provoke the MC straight out like a fool too. 8. Will there be face-slapping? Answer: There will be. But there won't be the generic face-slapping like you see in some novels where it was displayed once per 2/3 chapters. 9. How is the world background? Answer: With just the synopsis, genre, and tags, you can guess it yourself. 10. English is not my first language, so there will be mistakes inevitably, but I will try to reduce them as much as possible. 11. You, yes you, my readers, don't forget to vote for my novel too!!!

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