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TechnexGames
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2021-11-17 03:19

Hey there, author here! This is my debut novel! First and foremost, my story is incredibly slow paced! I mean that, seriously. So if you're looking for something fast paced and action filled, this isn't the story for you. Secondly, if you enjoy nothing but overpowered characters or the trends from cultivation stories, eg; faceslapping by chapter 3, "you're courting death", etc. type characters and stories, this is also not the story for you. Action was never intended to be the main hook of my story, so several chapters can pass without a single moment of combat. This is my take on the VR Game/VRMMORPG/litrpg genre, and while I use common themes from the genre, I try to twist them and make them my own. One of the major themes of my story is the butterfly effect, and if you pay attention, there is a good chance you may figure out major parts of the story before it gets revealed. Yes, my story is also chock full of references and nods to pop culture, mythology, folklore, etc. A lot of my character names are puns or references in themselves, so if you figure them out, feel free to comment. That is all for now, I hope you enjoy my work.

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yb48
yb48Lv14

romance/harem?

TechnexGames
TechnexGamesAuthor

Definitely no harem, and so far no romance with the main character is planned.

yb48:romance/harem?
THE_SINGHOO
THE_SINGHOOLv1

i hope you can update chapter daily and fast

TechnexGames
TechnexGamesAuthor

I'm working as fast as I can! Currently doing one chapter daily.

THE_SINGHOO:i hope you can update chapter daily and fast
Jake_Satterfield
Jake_SatterfieldLv10

The leveling system seems pitifully slow, at the current pace it will be 30years in the future for our MC to hit level 2000 assuming that further down the line the leveling speed crawls up to halt even more, at this point I'm left to wonder if it wouldn't be more practical to unlock all soul slots for the bonus stats rather than attempt to level up for that +1 attribute point...

TechnexGames
TechnexGamesAuthor

It is slow, but do take in mind that during the beta they've got like four hours per day to play. This limit wont really apply once he can play the game all day at his own pace, so he'll quickly rocket up the early levels once he gets to the main game. Also, I don't intend to show off level 2000. The Quetzalcoatl seal is in a level 1000+ area, so as long as he's ahead of the pack on the leaderboard, he would be able to do the quest around that level. Which he was close to after only 15 years of playing to level.

Jake_Satterfield:The leveling system seems pitifully slow, at the current pace it will be 30years in the future for our MC to hit level 2000 assuming that further down the line the leveling speed crawls up to halt even more, at this point I'm left to wonder if it wouldn't be more practical to unlock all soul slots for the bonus stats rather than attempt to level up for that +1 attribute point...
aigotcha
aigotchaLv3

Ok I came from (you know where), and I’ve given powerstones, I’ll drop a review after I’ve finished binging

kevkev_Deogracias
kevkev_DeograciasLv1

is this novel like Game become reality? or just pure gaming?

TechnexGames
TechnexGamesAuthor

Just pure game, but the game isn't the entire focus of the story.

kevkev_Deogracias:is this novel like Game become reality? or just pure gaming?
SIRI_NOVA10121999
SIRI_NOVA10121999Lv14

it's appreciated 👍

TechnexGames:I'm working as fast as I can! Currently doing one chapter daily.
SIRI_NOVA10121999
SIRI_NOVA10121999Lv14

I'm more interested in Anna's story and what will happen in the future. It has caught me really intrigued 😅. Also would Arthur find a way to twist Anna's fate or will he let things follow the previous timeline? It has me glued to the phone.

IsekaiLord
IsekaiLordLv4

pop? You mean kpoop? That's cool, just lost a few billion readers

TechnexGames
TechnexGamesAuthor

Pop cuture, as in popular culture: Games, anime, movies, manga, etc.

IsekaiLord:pop? You mean kpoop? That's cool, just lost a few billion readers
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I_Hate_Time_Loops
I_Hate_Time_LoopsLv15

So you’re 170 chaps in, but is he still in the beta?

gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5

3 months later????

TechnexGames:Definitely no harem, and so far no romance with the main character is planned.
TechnexGames
TechnexGamesAuthor

Still definitely no harem, still no romance planned with the main character. Highly likely that this will not change, especially not until the chapters reach the 1000's mark, then who knows?

gamabunda4873:3 months later????
gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5

oh sadge to bad bye then

TechnexGames:Still definitely no harem, still no romance planned with the main character. Highly likely that this will not change, especially not until the chapters reach the 1000's mark, then who knows?
Shreyasi_Sikdar_5010
Shreyasi_Sikdar_5010Lv3

please update more!!!!!

Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

Is this novel completed or dropped?

TechnexGames
TechnexGamesAuthor

Neither, it's still ongoing.

Humbuub:Is this novel completed or dropped?
Other Reviews
Saarlink
SaarlinkLv5

Original but boring. Things I liked: The MC is basically an in-game scholar which is a cool new take that I wish had more play. Their family owns the game in addition to a bunch of other cool sci-fi related products/labs which is both an interesting character background and could wow the reader with ideas about the future. (Unfortunately, so far it is way underused) The world is a mix of different cultures from around the world and throughout history which hopefully means breaking away from East Asia/Europe (which is the generic setting for many of these). The fights are interesting and well done. The downsides: All of this sounds amazing but the delivery just felt flat to me. The only two cool sci-fi things actually mentioned are the video game and something to generate energy. The world feels modern rather than futuristic because of this. The family isn't interesting. Nothing wrong with that IRL but in a story it means that the chapters with the father drag due to a lack of interest. The sister is so in and out that she isn't much of a character. Again it makes sense why this would be IRL but in a story we need characters that grow and are interesting. There are glimmers of this with the MC's schoolmates and the former rankers in game but they aren't given enough time/enough of a spotlight to develop into anything. The game story is really slow. I don't really care about him doing a quest that everyone else has to do, just slightly quicker. The ghost sub plot is great but is buried under ... an escort quest that he takes for ??? reasons? The quest to gain Gaia's interest was cool too but the rewards were uninteresting. Ultimately his rewards are bland (50 chapters in and there is nothing that stands out), his actions are uninspired (there are no cool finding hidden treasures or bosses, just knowing how to get a base class), and when he does get interesting quests he either ignores them (he ignores the ghost until he can't anymore) or declines them (The oracle's epic quest). When the author mentioned the world was a mix of ours, I was hoping for a hybrid and therefore new culture. Not just a copy paste of cultures in different places, and those places are just European ones we have all seen before. Verdict: Worth a read to see if it is for you. The author may well be on to something eventually but I'm not willing to slog through more chapters to get to 'the good stuff'.

TurtleOfRainbow
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