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Passerby_Venne
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2023-05-11 17:09

Very good! Now you might be wonder, what do I mean with "Very good?" That's a good question. The Cambridgeshire dictionary defines the word "Very" as the following: "(used to add emphasis to an adjective or adverb) to a great degree or extremely" And the word good, as the following: "very satisfactory, enjoyable, pleasant, or interesting:" The implications of these definitions would imply that, what I meant with "Very good." Is that I'm emphasizing the satisfaction of reading this fanfic. What are the criteria for the satisfaction of this fanfic? Good question. I believe we can find the criteria in the "Add a review" part of webnovel, where we have to judge 5 qualities of the said fiction by the number of stars they deserve according to your subjective experience. The five qualities are the following: 1. Writing quality: I believe this specific to the familiarity with the language the author is using, the grammar and writing errors. 2. Story development: I believe this is meant to infer the quality of the plot development. 3.Character design: I believe this depends on the depths of a characters personality, growth and vividness. 4.Updating stability: I believe this criteria is specifically about the release of the chapters and how regular it is. 5.World background: This is harder to interpret, but one could understand it how well the author made the world come alive. By ratings each of these criterion by stars 1-5, the accumulated stars will be calculated to give an average value of star between all those that added a review. My Average value was calculated as 4.2

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