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FluffiaBeard
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2021-05-19 04:26

Recommend: Reading. Not really sure about stability of updates, so I just put it at three. Writing quality, story development, and world background seem decent so fours across the board. Character design is three because there are characters I like, even if it's characters I like because I like to hate them, and also characters that I should like or hate but I just... kind of feel bleh about. Unfortunately, the MC is one of those characters that I feel kind of... meh... about at times when I'm pretty sure I'm supposed to just like the MC as a general rule of thumb. It's possible though, that this is just not my type of MC and others will like him. I do have a positive opinion of the story overall though, and I like most of it; even some aspects of the things I don't quite like overall, such as the MC... I don't hate him outright. This is why I would recommend giving this story a read. I don't think you'll come away from reading this with a feeling of having wasted your time. It's above average quality, in my opinion.

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Gilgamesh_Craos
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I Disagree the exposition chapters are a waste of time and your money and they happen so frequently that you get unimmersed in the world and i audiably groan every time they accomplish like 30 things in one day…like about ch 150 less than a whole week has passed and he has had a lot of contact with hundereds of soul stones or we that are said to be worth upwards of hundreds of mil llions of dollars already. Additionally the stats in this novel are literally never used, and also the mc’s knowledge is so incrediblely overreaching for someone who just transmigrated into some suicidal teen who had at best average knowledge into card creation. I call bs that op eye powers and a little knowledge of average joe cards and materials makes you qualified to use stuff that whose value is literally millions upon millions upon millions of dollars. No rich person in their right mind even if they are desperate would resort to some random kid they saw an ad for on the internet…

FluffiaBeard
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If you don't like that much plot, read a different book. If you don't like plot at all... well... just... I don't know... go read a picture book or watch a show. Manga and Anime are pretty good. It gets right into the action, being all about the visuals. Although, manga and anime do sometimes have a lot of plot as well. Second... just... don't spend money on stuff you can get for free? I... I don't know why it's so difficult to understand that. I mean, if I get a bunch of money some day... I'll probably spend some of it on webnovel just to repay them for sporting a website like this. But... you don't actually have to pay for any of this stuff. You can get two or so free chapters a day, and there's lots of free stories that you can read while waiting for the free tickets to read the stories you liked. There's no need to involve money at all. Heck, they're getting advertisement money anyway. So it's not even bad for them if you don't spend a bunch of money on buying stories. As for the story itself, ya... I tend to suspend my disbelief on a lot of this stuff. Like my hero academia. obviously it should be a college, and Izuku should be eighteen. No one in their right mind would send fifteen year olds to a place that is at risk of being attacked by random people with horrifying killing ability. On the other hand, eighteen year olds are adults; so it's their choice even if it's a bad choice. Or in dragon ball Z, there's no way a most of thing situations should happen. There's just no concern for child safety at all, and there were even situations that made no sense at all: like when Goku gives Cell a Senzu bean. I mean, honestly, just throw all your disbelief off the top floor and fire a rocket launcher down after it. Then shoot it with a machine gun until there aren't any more pieces left. Then use the infinity gauntlet to make sure it's all gone.

Gilgamesh_Craos:I Disagree the exposition chapters are a waste of time and your money and they happen so frequently that you get unimmersed in the world and i audiably groan every time they accomplish like 30 things in one day…like about ch 150 less than a whole week has passed and he has had a lot of contact with hundereds of soul stones or we that are said to be worth upwards of hundreds of mil llions of dollars already. Additionally the stats in this novel are literally never used, and also the mc’s knowledge is so incrediblely overreaching for someone who just transmigrated into some suicidal teen who had at best average knowledge into card creation. I call bs that op eye powers and a little knowledge of average joe cards and materials makes you qualified to use stuff that whose value is literally millions upon millions upon millions of dollars. No rich person in their right mind even if they are desperate would resort to some random kid they saw an ad for on the internet…
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