The story itself is really good. The problem is that the author can't keep their facts straight. You'll have a character introduced and then 3 chapters later that same character is suddenly called something entirely different. Even in the same paragraph I once saw the author call her Ayaka, then call her Ayame, then right back to Ayaka again... all the while calling her a 'he'. Later they go to planet Vegeta, even though the planet had been destroyed 30 years earlier. The author seemed to have the word "Vegeta" drilled into their head because he also started calling Bardock Vegeta as well. This story also suffers from the same thing most stories on this site do. For some reason authors here can't get the whole gender thing figured out, calling women "he/him". All in all, reading this story is like reading the memoirs of an Alzheimer's patient.
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Auch, así de mal está la traducción he... Mejor lo paso, ya tuve suficiente MTL por el resto de mi vida, Tengo el mtl al mismo nivel que ntr y tragedia.
