has potential but i hope the author can translate this story it has good potential and looks cool jdjfjsjfjsbfufbfifndjfnfffxd

It has potential at first. But the story getting more weird because of time travel which is should be banned by god. Yup its time travel, not timeline travel. U know how she has another self which named hongye or something which is appeared on cell saga. She is also has another self wich is old generation supreme kai.. its soo confusing. And idk how time patrol or lord chronoa didn't make an appearance. When she travel between the time, she created history herself which make look like the original dragon ball use to be. U know, when whis and beerus make an appearance after majin buu saga, they are quite shock seeing ayaka still alive after million years. While she still only in 40. Well the story itself is messed up because of mc. So i give it bad story review.

I really like this story the translation is good, the story is not rushed and is not just a copycat of the dragon ball events and the protagonist is interesting it’s rare to have a woman sayan.

The story itself is really good. The problem is that the author can't keep their facts straight. You'll have a character introduced and then 3 chapters later that same character is suddenly called something entirely different. Even in the same paragraph I once saw the author call her Ayaka, then call her Ayame, then right back to Ayaka again... all the while calling her a 'he'. Later they go to planet Vegeta, even though the planet had been destroyed 30 years earlier. The author seemed to have the word "Vegeta" drilled into their head because he also started calling Bardock Vegeta as well. This story also suffers from the same thing most stories on this site do. For some reason authors here can't get the whole gender thing figured out, calling women "he/him". All in all, reading this story is like reading the memoirs of an Alzheimer's patient.

🫠 quite good but there are several errors present in the story .

The story is very good at the beginning until the android saga, after that it becomes a generic chinese cultivation story and from Dragon Ball only the name remains.

Hi. This one is nice. It is enough for me. Does anyone have a recommendation for novel or fanfic which has female lead like this fanfic and not yuri (straight / normal relationship)?

Well it is genderbend story where mc was Male but reborn as a girl. And I don’t like such a story. But I already read this author's other story. that's why I'm out!.

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