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2024-06-16 12:02

still waiting here, I hope you came back

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I'm working on it. I'll post it on Friday.

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LordInsanity
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MC has a LOTM system. Former useless fat NEET reincarnated into Danmachi pre-canon. Wears his artifacts (Mask, cloak, shoes) for no fucking reason and enters Hostess of Fertility. Anyone who's read danmachi knows that Freya is Syr, and that she can see souls. So Hurrdurr what do we expect when she's shocked to find souls in all of his artifacts? And why the **** did he even wear them in the first place? Takes Lily as an appetence beyonder for no apparent reason Suddenly acts like BFFs with Ryuu? Constantly makes mistakes like almost slipping up by almost saying his real name while in disguise. For some reason, he engages in combat with overconfidence only to fail like a ******* since he literally has no practice or training of any sort.' What? Are you going to tell me some fatass neet has a fucking blackbelt and 69 years of contract assassin experience? BS. He enters dungeon with no skills other than the shit he gets from drinking potions. I mean seriously you're facing monsters, just use some valis to pay for a tutor from the guild or some shit. Makes a fucking scene for no reason after killing the evilus people. Are you going to say it's for acting? Did the author explain what the thief pathway of acting is? Is it stealing? I don't know? But wooow he says that he the black emperor killed them all, gg. Author doesn't explain MC's thought process, or anything. MC is apparently some sort of veteran in fighting since he could take a whole familia with Ryuu. What gives him the motivation to do that? Shouldn't he just start by acting and gaining strength and not showboating without any thought? The only practice he's done is stealing and killing mobs in the dungeon? Has he fought any person with intelligence? Is he just spamming his skills hoping to kill someone? He used that gun of his and only managed to injure someone, what a big surprise, am I right?

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