I really hate it when everyone put a system inside their MC and just conveniently get everything from the start then why should I even read it? If you have read lord of the mysteries then you should know that, it's not a friendly world to anyone without exception
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LIKEfor real, I'm confused on why this needed to be a system in the first place. Why not give MC a Alchemist skill or something like that. And using monsters in the dungeon and other things he makes his own beyonder potions. Since the ingredients are from the dungeon, the MC will need to fight madness. Since the Dungeon is linked to the Gods, or atleast something AGAINST the gods, he could probably get sparks of divinity from it, or just steal blood from a god, not too hard. A unnatural, man-made God, of course it won't be "beautiful" like the other Gods, it'll be grotesque (Mythical Creature Form)
This sounds perfect
Bakenekon:for real, I'm confused on why this needed to be a system in the first place. Why not give MC a Alchemist skill or something like that. And using monsters in the dungeon and other things he makes his own beyonder potions. Since the ingredients are from the dungeon, the MC will need to fight madness. Since the Dungeon is linked to the Gods, or atleast something AGAINST the gods, he could probably get sparks of divinity from it, or just steal blood from a god, not too hard. A unnatural, man-made God, of course it won't be "beautiful" like the other Gods, it'll be grotesque (Mythical Creature Form)
I really wanna do it, but I'm the type of guy who has an idea, writes a chapter and gets another idea. it sucks. currently i have like 5 ideas 💀 JJK: Return by death (Subaru but didn't get isekaid) JJK: Lost Carcosa (JJK fic, mc wants to remove all cursed spirits, but is apposed to the idea of killing all non-sorceres. His CT is basically mental cues, mc is based on Hastur from King in Yellow) DxD: Antichrist (Mc is the core of Trihexa incarnated) and then finally we have Danmachi: Deus Ex Machina (aka LotM power system in danmachi)
LT_Ryuu_X:Please do!!!
I would probably read all of those, iv been looking for some good fics to read, I have written one fic before. So I would suggest planning it out and watch/read about the plot and powers of what ever your making a fic with. I had to re-watch all of pirates of the Caribbean and re-read the power system of plane piece just to make sure I know what’s what. Make a draft and then go through the draft as wel to make it look nice. Also don’t feel pressured to make updates on a really short time schedule, do maybe a chapter a week just to get the feel of it. That’s what I did till I got to chapter 20 and was able to write a chapter every 2 days.
Bakenekon:I really wanna do it, but I'm the type of guy who has an idea, writes a chapter and gets another idea. it sucks. currently i have like 5 ideas 💀 JJK: Return by death (Subaru but didn't get isekaid) JJK: Lost Carcosa (JJK fic, mc wants to remove all cursed spirits, but is apposed to the idea of killing all non-sorceres. His CT is basically mental cues, mc is based on Hastur from King in Yellow) DxD: Antichrist (Mc is the core of Trihexa incarnated) and then finally we have Danmachi: Deus Ex Machina (aka LotM power system in danmachi)