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2021-11-21 18:04

I really hate it when everyone put a system inside their MC and just conveniently get everything from the start then why should I even read it? If you have read lord of the mysteries then you should know that, it's not a friendly world to anyone without exception

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Bakenekon
BakenekonLv4

for real, I'm confused on why this needed to be a system in the first place. Why not give MC a Alchemist skill or something like that. And using monsters in the dungeon and other things he makes his own beyonder potions. Since the ingredients are from the dungeon, the MC will need to fight madness. Since the Dungeon is linked to the Gods, or atleast something AGAINST the gods, he could probably get sparks of divinity from it, or just steal blood from a god, not too hard. A unnatural, man-made God, of course it won't be "beautiful" like the other Gods, it'll be grotesque (Mythical Creature Form)

Reign_Wrld
Reign_WrldLv3

This sounds perfect

Bakenekon:for real, I'm confused on why this needed to be a system in the first place. Why not give MC a Alchemist skill or something like that. And using monsters in the dungeon and other things he makes his own beyonder potions. Since the ingredients are from the dungeon, the MC will need to fight madness. Since the Dungeon is linked to the Gods, or atleast something AGAINST the gods, he could probably get sparks of divinity from it, or just steal blood from a god, not too hard. A unnatural, man-made God, of course it won't be "beautiful" like the other Gods, it'll be grotesque (Mythical Creature Form)
Bakenekon
BakenekonLv4

Haha, I might actually do this myself now. I had the idea a while ago.

Reign_Wrld:This sounds perfect
LT_Ryuu_X
LT_Ryuu_XLv4

Please do!!!

Bakenekon:Haha, I might actually do this myself now. I had the idea a while ago.
Bakenekon
BakenekonLv4

I really wanna do it, but I'm the type of guy who has an idea, writes a chapter and gets another idea. it sucks. currently i have like 5 ideas 💀 JJK: Return by death (Subaru but didn't get isekaid) JJK: Lost Carcosa (JJK fic, mc wants to remove all cursed spirits, but is apposed to the idea of killing all non-sorceres. His CT is basically mental cues, mc is based on Hastur from King in Yellow) DxD: Antichrist (Mc is the core of Trihexa incarnated) and then finally we have Danmachi: Deus Ex Machina (aka LotM power system in danmachi)

LT_Ryuu_X:Please do!!!
LT_Ryuu_X
LT_Ryuu_XLv4

I would probably read all of those, iv been looking for some good fics to read, I have written one fic before. So I would suggest planning it out and watch/read about the plot and powers of what ever your making a fic with. I had to re-watch all of pirates of the Caribbean and re-read the power system of plane piece just to make sure I know what’s what. Make a draft and then go through the draft as wel to make it look nice. Also don’t feel pressured to make updates on a really short time schedule, do maybe a chapter a week just to get the feel of it. That’s what I did till I got to chapter 20 and was able to write a chapter every 2 days.

Bakenekon:I really wanna do it, but I'm the type of guy who has an idea, writes a chapter and gets another idea. it sucks. currently i have like 5 ideas 💀 JJK: Return by death (Subaru but didn't get isekaid) JJK: Lost Carcosa (JJK fic, mc wants to remove all cursed spirits, but is apposed to the idea of killing all non-sorceres. His CT is basically mental cues, mc is based on Hastur from King in Yellow) DxD: Antichrist (Mc is the core of Trihexa incarnated) and then finally we have Danmachi: Deus Ex Machina (aka LotM power system in danmachi)
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LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv5

MC has a LOTM system. Former useless fat NEET reincarnated into Danmachi pre-canon. Wears his artifacts (Mask, cloak, shoes) for no fucking reason and enters Hostess of Fertility. Anyone who's read danmachi knows that Freya is Syr, and that she can see souls. So Hurrdurr what do we expect when she's shocked to find souls in all of his artifacts? And why the **** did he even wear them in the first place? Takes Lily as an appetence beyonder for no apparent reason Suddenly acts like BFFs with Ryuu? Constantly makes mistakes like almost slipping up by almost saying his real name while in disguise. For some reason, he engages in combat with overconfidence only to fail like a ******* since he literally has no practice or training of any sort.' What? Are you going to tell me some fatass neet has a fucking blackbelt and 69 years of contract assassin experience? BS. He enters dungeon with no skills other than the shit he gets from drinking potions. I mean seriously you're facing monsters, just use some valis to pay for a tutor from the guild or some shit. Makes a fucking scene for no reason after killing the evilus people. Are you going to say it's for acting? Did the author explain what the thief pathway of acting is? Is it stealing? I don't know? But wooow he says that he the black emperor killed them all, gg. Author doesn't explain MC's thought process, or anything. MC is apparently some sort of veteran in fighting since he could take a whole familia with Ryuu. What gives him the motivation to do that? Shouldn't he just start by acting and gaining strength and not showboating without any thought? The only practice he's done is stealing and killing mobs in the dungeon? Has he fought any person with intelligence? Is he just spamming his skills hoping to kill someone? He used that gun of his and only managed to injure someone, what a big surprise, am I right?

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