MC has a LOTM system. Former useless fat NEET reincarnated into Danmachi pre-canon. Wears his artifacts (Mask, cloak, shoes) for no fucking reason and enters Hostess of Fertility. Anyone who's read danmachi knows that Freya is Syr, and that she can see souls. So Hurrdurr what do we expect when she's shocked to find souls in all of his artifacts? And why the **** did he even wear them in the first place? Takes Lily as an appetence beyonder for no apparent reason Suddenly acts like BFFs with Ryuu? Constantly makes mistakes like almost slipping up by almost saying his real name while in disguise. For some reason, he engages in combat with overconfidence only to fail like a ******* since he literally has no practice or training of any sort.' What? Are you going to tell me some fatass neet has a fucking blackbelt and 69 years of contract assassin experience? BS. He enters dungeon with no skills other than the shit he gets from drinking potions. I mean seriously you're facing monsters, just use some valis to pay for a tutor from the guild or some shit. Makes a fucking scene for no reason after killing the evilus people. Are you going to say it's for acting? Did the author explain what the thief pathway of acting is? Is it stealing? I don't know? But wooow he says that he the black emperor killed them all, gg. Author doesn't explain MC's thought process, or anything. MC is apparently some sort of veteran in fighting since he could take a whole familia with Ryuu. What gives him the motivation to do that? Shouldn't he just start by acting and gaining strength and not showboating without any thought? The only practice he's done is stealing and killing mobs in the dungeon? Has he fought any person with intelligence? Is he just spamming his skills hoping to kill someone? He used that gun of his and only managed to injure someone, what a big surprise, am I right?

I really hate it when everyone put a system inside their MC and just conveniently get everything from the start then why should I even read it? If you have read lord of the mysteries then you should know that, it's not a friendly world to anyone without exception

I usually list the fanfic, I like in my mind by tiers, this one was in my top top top tier the one which has only like 2 novels there and this is the 3rd never expected it to be fanfic, I seriously hope u continue this and never drop it, please I beg of u master. you caught the aspect of lotm totally.

I begeth thee author, please return and bless us more with the chapters of this masterpiece. On a side note, this is a really good fanfic. It has LOTM elements mixed into it, the MC and his crazy beyonder cast is likeable (theyre a bit silly), and it somehow fits right into Danmachi.

Bad FF. Author makes idiotic goofy MC. I feel that the author didn't pay much attention to the whole LOTM. I feel that the author is only too concerned with just making a lot of words by writing nonsense in this FF story. The point is that every behavior that MC has is just a weeb who doesn't understand anything (idiot) regarding LOTM. He only knows how much powerful 'stuff' LOTM is (but doesn't know the 'core' of the whole story). It's better for other readers to leave this FF, if you want to find an interesting story without wasting your time.

still waiting here, I hope you came back

Very good but the things with Lilly and the hostess if fertility was kinda stupid I mean he’s years before canon he can take thing slow

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