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SkyNeves
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2022-01-17 03:23

WOW I've been reading this book since the Naruto fic started and haven't reviewed it yet... I'm disappointed 馃様 ANYWAY! Let's review. 1-Writing Quality: The grammar is great, it's well written and it's fun to read. There's nice spacing between scenes, and the author knows how to make sound effects and I point this out because recently I read a book where it was so translated that *whoosh* turned into *call out* , I kid you not it hurt my heart. [5 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: No comment, it's nice, it's fluid and most importantly there's info to stuff related to the story. Even if people don't know Alohamora at least once in the book we get a description of what the spell does. There's no delays in the plot like massive flashbacks or random and major timeskips. [5 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: The characters are well designed and have consistent personalities, if their personality does change it will be gradually and it feels so good to read a good character development. Random Hater: "But the MC changed completely." B***h MC was a momma's boy and even after 400 chapters he still is! He grew but his essence is still there. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: We get chapter daily, I even got chapter updates on Christmas! [5 Stars Here] 5-World Background: There is so much world background that I've learned more about world history here then at class! I am currently living in on of the countries that Mighty Monke mentioned and I can attest to the things he mentioned so he does his research before writing and then he improves and makes a great chapter. [5 Stars Here] Overall: 5.0 because ratings can't pass 5.

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Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.

SkyNeves
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Im reading your Walking Dead book but I'll give the Harry Potter one a go too.

SrCuervo:Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.
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